|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|the last line in your verses is beautiful Deb
and also offers one to ponder our fate
by being chosen, or choosing...
The Bounty of Love's Choices
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
The first time is always the sweetest and memorable when you're with the right person. Very beautiful.
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Very romantic piece.|
|Reviewed by Christine Volkoff
|Ah, so simple, gorgeous, and moving...great poem!|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Love the ending....
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|A dynamic experience...with a beautiful ending!
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|It was already right- love that.