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Our ' First ' Time
by D. L. Vaineo

Wednesday, February 02, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I was nervous, restless
Somewhat unsure...
My whole life waited
For this anticipated day

When we met...I knew
You would be my 'love'
My first time
Our first time

I wanted everything
To be right...memorable
It was already right
You chose to be
 with me.. .. .. 

 


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Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 2/4/2011
the last line in your verses is beautiful Deb
and also offers one to ponder our fate
by being chosen, or choosing...

The Bounty of Love's Choices
Vickie
Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat 2/3/2011
D.L.,

The first time is always the sweetest and memorable when you're with the right person. Very beautiful.

Mary
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 2/3/2011
Very romantic piece.
Reviewed by Christine Volkoff 2/2/2011
Ah, so simple, gorgeous, and moving...great poem!
Reviewed by Felix Perry 2/2/2011
Love the ending....
fee
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 2/2/2011
A dynamic experience...with a beautiful ending!
Christine
Reviewed by John Bidwell 2/2/2011
It was already right- love that.
Beautiful!

John
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