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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
2/10/2011 |
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| I'd also take a double shot.....M |
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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
2/6/2011 |
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I needed to read something like this... still smiling.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Chessly Nesci |
2/6/2011 |
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| Very cute poem! I will take a double Captain with Coke! You don't have to measure perfectly lol...Take care, ~Chessly |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
2/5/2011 |
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| Complicated, indeed. I better have a morning pick me up, and contemplate this a little more. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/4/2011 |
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In my humble estimation (measuring your words), I think this is very clever, Patrick. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by pat medlin |
2/4/2011 |
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| okay patrick...i think everyone's in agreement........you lost us all somewhere around line two.... then reeled us back in with only 3 fingers...not an easy feat |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
2/4/2011 |
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Giggle.....neat writing, my friend! Glad you worked it all out with the scotch!!!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
2/4/2011 |
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| Cute one, Patrick. And well done. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
2/3/2011 |
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You, Patrick, are an incurable logician!!!
A very funny poem ;)~
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Mark Lichterman |
2/3/2011 |
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As usual, and I'd guess it's my age, but you lost me at about, "Willingness requires empathy." So I don't know if it's because I'm becoming feeble minded or because I just don't know what the hell you're talking about... Except for the three fingers of scotch but in my case it would be three fingers of tequila which is the proper measure for a shot of tequila; Sauza Tequila, that is; white or gold, it don't matter.
Mark... Oh, yeah, help your wife. |
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| Reviewed by Chip Bergeron |
2/3/2011 |
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"What is the measure of a man..."
Chip Bergeron |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/3/2011 |
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| Haven't read King's, but you stand alone,almost always first rate... |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
2/3/2011 |
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| Damn, but you are a crazy S.O.B., except for the last paragraph, I go right along with that part...e |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
2/3/2011 |
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I'd take it to his behind. A very measured poem.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
2/3/2011 |
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Patrick, you lost me at "Standards" I haven't had any for years, but then you got me back at the 3 fingered double Scotch. Think we're on the same page now and I enjoyed reading this one.
Thanks Dick |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
2/3/2011 |
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simply immeasurable!!!
pass me a Sammy :)
(Samuel Adams) :) |
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