|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|finally getting back round to the literature and glad i dropped by to read this incredible piece of philosophical inspiration. really nicely done chessly, glad you've broken the ties which bind!!|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|I know it's easier to say than do, but I hope this tortured
woman will kick the door (or whatever is in the way), walk out
and never look back. Damn well written, Chessly. -gene.
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Very deep indeed ...great writing sweet lady...stay safe and well..Hugsss|
|Reviewed by Vesna Blueflame
|It's my time to live, now let me out!
I feel this to be a truth within me as well..YES!!
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I and me crying out. A no holds barred plea for help.
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|A very deep write Chessly and always my best to you take care your friend Laura|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I find your expressive write assertive and liberating as well as filled with hope. Thank you for sharing it, Chessly. You go, girl! Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Throw away the key and don't look back! Patrick|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Chessly this is a very compelling poem. Disturbing and yet hopeful of liberty. Wonderful work.|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Chessly, this is a very serious issue that you write about. In so many ways any woman who has felt trapped in a relationship, marraige, situation can feel your words touch the very core of her soul. There are so many in this situation..I pray for them and thank you for touching on a very delicate subject matter with class and sensitivity.
Peace, love and light my sweet dear,
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|I like Jerry's comment...so true, This is a poem I wrote when I must of been feeling the same, your words felt Chessly, Love and Hug, Christine
I would pack up my life,
hit the trail of dust,
no borders would I see,
mountains not an obstacle,
but stone of steps to lead,
this shackled heart that paid the price,
to be unlocked and finally set free
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|I hear ya. Prisons don't all have steel bars.|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|this piece takes me to the lovely ladies behind
the Islamic Religions and the hijab & kaftan tunics
or any other woman behind metaphoric veils. No one
should ever remain where they do not want to be...period.
Your words reveal this with depths (to me) & I hope all
women will always stand up for what they want & deserve.
It's never a bad time to dump a bad situation...
Love's Opening Threshold
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|Good write...from prison with shackles and chains to the joy of escape to a brighter day...this piece has it all...well done
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Excellent expressions, strongly felt, superb poem!|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|This is wonderful, aristic and awake poetry, and I so understand this at the deepest level. It takes some great act of courage...
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|We all get that fenced in feeling at times, i got it now, with this ice and snowy weather and being bound in the house for days on end.
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|This makes perfect sense if 'sense' is the right word when it comes to strong emotion, but you know what i mean.
The urge to break free is more than a want or a need, it's a demand the soul makes.
This is fine thinking and feeling and writing, Chessly.
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|That is how to say it, Chessly! I can feel the emotions in each line perfectly.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Even love can imprison someone if it is not given and received as a free spirit with the ability to fly if the need to happens...
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Very vivid and compelling, Chessly. No one should be shackled, no matter what the circumstance. You presented your case brilliantly, Chessly.
Love and Peace