|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|nice pain-its the pain you feel if you love someone...that feeling you get when you say "i love you" and really mean it...
Bad bad-is when that person says goodbye never to come back
death pain-haven't had that...still to young to die.......and only the good die young..so we will grow old my mate....lol'But back to your poem
Very deep message in there..pain in death could be "Hell"? who knows..
|Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)
|if I defined reality by my pains, I'd have been cold and rotted through by now.
- put on a happy face, damn it! (-:
|Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)
|i like the frank tone you have captured- again your words are meaningful, and your style is clean.|
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|yin/yang.. without pain we wouldnt know joy, we wouldnt recognize it when we have it..even simple pleasures can be savored.. but its a shame that men cannot know the pain of childbirth since it is followed my the ultimate joy! Your poem is really beautiful, Rog. Your truths seem to mirror your heart, letting the cynic soften a bit, for the cynical is no more reality than the fantasy..and truth is a matter of opinion. You make me think. thank you. katy.|
|Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
Wonderful strike for the equitable honoring of grief and death, and the Queston.
|Reviewed by a- maryllis
|Powerful and thought provoking...
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|pain captured well...excellent write, roger! (((HUGS))) and a fellow sufferer of pain, karla. :)|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
Thus I am left to define
By only the pains
from a gifted poet.
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Reviewed by jude forese
|pain can define the essence of existence...|
|Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)