by Ronald W. Hull
Sunday, February 06, 2011
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Katrina at Night by McGee
Sorry, my Freudian slipped.
Lightning struck and I was born,
mid the thundering growing corn.
Like the blood flood in my brew,
washed me clean and brand-new.
The tides of my time came into view,
as a fire in me flickered, and then grew.
The sun rose in my misty eyes,
and revealed your cumulus skies.
The same sun beat on skin so sweet,
and wiped the doubt clouds fleet.
You, I'd won fore the setting sun,
turned the amber dusk to gray
A moon beamed into my night,
as I earthquaked at your sight.
Volcanoes erupted in my plight,
and I landslided to the last light.
The wolf wind howled lean and bright,
into a tornado's passionate fright.
A hurricane blended and never offended,
as I tsunamied with all my might.
Soon winter came without any blame,
and I avalanched into spring.
Only to begin to trade winds again.
Copyright 2011 © Ronald W. Hull
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|Reviewed by Mary Grace Patterson
|Vivid images in this breathtaking poem of life. Exceptional verse.....M|
|Reviewed by Michael Guy
|Man this IS good! The lines in this are superb...I really love these metaphors and I'm not a little jealous! Great pic too. IF i could write like this I would do poetry again...
|Reviewed by jude forese
|well written ... enjoyed immensely ...|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Such a unique way of expressing your imagination; this awakens thoughts and feeling, Ron. The graphic image that you have chosen very effectively complements your words. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Kind of leaves me breathless!!! Wonderful poetry, Ronald...and that picture is awesome!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|you are a storm to be reckoned with mr hull;-)creative writing!|
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Fun and unusual application of seasonal and natural phenomena ala autobiography. Now I know why you're such a high voltage guy! Patrick|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Excellent flow. The picture also enhances the mood of the piece.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|What a wonderful poem, such crisp images and unusual metaphors! I love this one Ron.|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|As always ,lovely writing sweet man..stay safe and well..Hugsss|
|Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
|Ronald, Emotions are like the weather! Excellent analogy! Loved your poem! Take care, and god bless! ~Chessly|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Phenomenal in flow and feel ~ left me breathless!