The rhythm of the dance
by Denise Edwards
Tuesday, February 22, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Inspired by the picture.
I love the rhythm of the dance
swing and dip me on the floor
Catch the symphony’s new cadence
Feel it deep within your core
It keeps the rhythm flowing smooth
So the dancers maintain poise
It’s orchestrated soft and low
To filter out surrounding noise
Do the tango, boldly stepping
Daring stares at your dance mate
Sexy swivel as you’re prepping
To finish with an austere gait
Dark moon, rise and wake the night
Sends a signal loud and clear
Chantille ball begins at midnight
Shame on you, if you’re not there
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|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Such great energy in this poem Denise, would make anyone want to dance!|
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|i love it too, great poem|
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|This is a really a very romantic poem and remember, it takes two to tango. There is romance in the air with those daring stares, and when the dance is over and you have cught your breath, then you retire for the night and what goes on behind closed doors, goes on. Thanx for sharing this delightful poem that has a smooth flowing cadence all its own.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
|Reviewed by Tim VanGuilder (Reader)
|An elegant unfolding of tripping the light fantastic. Take Care. Ciao tj|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Beautiful writing sweet lady.....I love how you ended this.....nice too see you posting....sighhh...Hugsss|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|The dance of life spins around in spirals of sweet music always changing. Our dance partners may change but the music continues. Well written Denise....
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|I could see and hear it all...loved it!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|I can just hear the sound of the big band. Nothing quite like it. They have an orchestra around here that puts on shows and has at least one big dance a year.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You have created the mood of such an experience very effectively through your verses, Denise. Thank you. Love and best wishes,