by Keighley Louise Perkins
Sunday, October 06, 2002
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I am the greedist chocoholic around
I'll eat every scrap of chocolate that's found,
I think it started ever since I was just two
Now I am hooked and I don't know what to do,
Six bars a day of the chunky delight I will buy
If I don't have some I know I will surely die,
Unwrapping my golden treasure bit by bit
And way before I know I've completely devoured it,
Friends think I'm crazy when I throw money away
Buying at least two of each kind around a day,
I must be all that all chocolate makers desire
Because my amount for the day slowly gets higher,
I have a habit of throwing away every shiny, flat gold
So that I can have something sweet that I can hold,
Don't matter the make, the type or the brand
I'll eat every scrap that's scattered across this land,
I know very soon I'll quickly begin to gain weight
I know very soon I'll be worked up into a state,
Every five seconds I know I'll rush back for me
Soon chocolate will have to be delievered to my door,
I'll lose all my money, my friends and my fame
Trapped in this chocolate eating game,
But as long as they supply that sweet, golden delight
I know that in the future everything will be all right.
This poem is dedicated to my friend, Eleri. Wyt tin ffrind da, ond wyt ti ddigri!!!!! cariad mawr.
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|Reviewed by Rhian Goddard
|Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
|This addiction never grabbed me--thank god.
Don't think I could break it.
Chocolate is tooo much fun! Vicky
|Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
|Boy, do I know how that feels. Sometimes I can't sleep unless I have some chocolate. Though, I think I could give you a run for your money. But don't all chocoholics think they love chocolate more than anyone else?|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|hahahaha great write, Save some for another chocoholic please...Floria|
|Reviewed by Calendula Petal
|aha!.....what could be finer than a chocolate diner. Love chocolate, love this.|
|Reviewed by Madame X
|The titled pulled me in. When all else fails, search for the baking chips. From one chocoholic to another!|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Reviewed by eleri
|aaaww k!! wyt tin ffrind da hefyd babes!!!
i luvya loads!! thnx for dedicating that poem to me as im truly a chocoholic!!! lol!!
i love chocolate!!! and i love you to!! thnx for being a gr8 m8!! il always be there for you and i hope you get good marks in your chem work and im always here to help you out with anything...even welsh!!! lol!!
i really hope to see you soon!!
god belss ya, your a wicked lass and may your dreams come true!!!
go for the top gal!! i belive in you and i know youd make a superb writer babe!!!!
and by the way... we will find noel no matter what...lol...;)
all ma love
always and forever