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|I like the flow...and especially the ending. Very good!|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Clever word play--my kind of write.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|excellent, steve! very thought provoking message throughout this simple write...well done! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)|
|Reviewed by R Kimberley
|This was wonderful! So true, and what a flow this piece has!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
So true and
promise is all we
can hope for in a world such as this...
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Yes Steve, long as there is life
there is promise.
Good write, my friend.