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Jimmy L Holder

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Undone
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There was a man with some spices
He seasoned his food
And cooked it slowly,
He hoped it would not be undone,
And he prayed fear would not ruin this meal.
He raised his voice to the sky
And prayed and marched in peace,
And he whispered as Heaven sang ...
Heaven said, "Preach on,
And your dream will unfurl."
Death visited this holy man
And a huge dark cloud engulfed the sky
And he never tasted his meal,
But others said it was a tasty thing.
Never before had a man
Spoke like this about freedom
Although his dream is still undone.


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Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)
Yes, his "dream" is still undone!
What a wonderful write!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
This is excellent.

I would suggest that rather than breaking this up into stanza's, it would have more impact as one continuous verse.

I wouldn't change a word. It is lovely and insightful.

~E
Reviewed by Melissa Rives
very powerful writing...so well spoken!
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Excellent!!!! enjoyed this much
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
super!!!!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Interesting thoughts you have woven throughout this poem. BTW thanks for dropping by my port.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Very nicely-written!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
Reviewed by Trixie Love
Outstanding...

Thanks
Trixie :)
Reviewed by jude forese
awesome!
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Such a creative write the metaphor is incredibly powerfull...
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Makes me think of the 'old testament' in any event, I love your art and you, lots!

Love,Janet xoxoxoxo
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Excellent write ShyPoet1....
very nice.
peggy