|Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)
|Yes, his "dream" is still undone!
What a wonderful write!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|This is excellent.
I would suggest that rather than breaking this up into stanza's, it would have more impact as one continuous verse.
I wouldn't change a word. It is lovely and insightful.
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|very powerful writing...so well spoken!|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|Excellent!!!! enjoyed this much|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Interesting thoughts you have woven throughout this poem. BTW thanks for dropping by my port.|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
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|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Such a creative write the metaphor is incredibly powerfull...|
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|Makes me think of the 'old testament' in any event, I love your art and you, lots!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Excellent write ShyPoet1....