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| Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader) |
10/29/2002 |
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Yes, his "dream" is still undone!
What a wonderful write!
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
10/8/2002 |
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This is excellent.
I would suggest that rather than breaking this up into stanza's, it would have more impact as one continuous verse.
I wouldn't change a word. It is lovely and insightful.
~E |
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| Reviewed by Melissa Rives |
10/7/2002 |
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| very powerful writing...so well spoken! |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
10/7/2002 |
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| Excellent!!!! enjoyed this much |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/7/2002 |
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| super!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
10/7/2002 |
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| Interesting thoughts you have woven throughout this poem. BTW thanks for dropping by my port. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
10/7/2002 |
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Very nicely-written!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$ |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
10/7/2002 |
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Outstanding...
Thanks
Trixie :) |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/6/2002 |
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| awesome! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/6/2002 |
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| Such a creative write the metaphor is incredibly powerfull... |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell |
10/6/2002 |
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Makes me think of the 'old testament' in any event, I love your art and you, lots!
Love,Janet xoxoxoxo |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
10/6/2002 |
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Excellent write ShyPoet1....
very nice.
peggy |
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