|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Write on! I can't see why people get so polarized over something that is as natural as life and death. It's as though they have learned nothing from history and how ideologies perpetuate fallacies as though they were true. It's a good thing a few poets out there are thinking and not just following.
|Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
|And it gets you, coming and going!!!
|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|This is wonderfully philosophical! Questions that tantalize.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Lifeis what it is, but it would be nice to have a little common sense in the equation too You sure bring out many fine points for one to think about...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|yes, i heard about those deranged fans at the dodgers opener last week versus the giants. nice, gotta love LA man, just the way it is. or not.|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Lots to ponder here,Patrick! I think its just life....nicely done...
|Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
|Yes, true, so enjoy each and every day and think of not a noose but a chain of life:
"Time held me green and dying
Though I sang in my chains like the sea." Dylan Thomas
|Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa
|I go with what the Bible says, gives the answer to every life's question. The flow of the poem was great.|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|LIFE IS SACRED...ANYTHING GOD CREATED IS SACRED. SO THEN...THE ANSWER LIES WITH THE INTERPRETOR...AND THAT'S JUST THE WAY IT IS. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. LOVE & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
|Patrick, Life is what we make it. I have had some tuff times and wonder when it will end? I hope it does before I die. If it doesn't I will still wake up with a smile because I am still here to love by boys. Very profound write! Take care,~ Chessly|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Brave exploration, deeply felt Patrick.
Man, you are so eclectic and yes that's a huge compliment!
I never know what style I'm about to read and you do them all so compellingly well.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|We are just through this life passing & u said it right, its just life as such is life...e|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|We all are just passing through this life..your breathing believe me we are lucky just to be here..life is what you make it ....great writing dear man...Hugsss keep smiling OK|
|Reviewed by Vesper Darby
|yahoooo patrick...4 in the morning and am rockin' this room cheering your words on...this one wins by a lead
if this doesn't make some of the non-thinkers think...they've been lobotomized...am passing out copies to some of the 'glazed-over'deep as mudpuddlethinkers' that gather aroundthewatercooler.
this was better than my alarm clock which still hasn't gone off.
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Profound indeed. Well done, Patrick.|
|Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
|Very deep and very profound, my friend. And why should you "probably know better"? You said it just as it should be said.