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|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Beautifully orchestrated build-up of words made this poem of longing excellent to read. The pain of being alone without your lover is front and center, and even the reader, if he has any passion whatsoever for love can feel the pain. (Kinda don't care for that phrase, "feel the pain," but it seems to work here.)|