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My Way or Yours
by Tracey L Hardie

Tuesday, October 08, 2002

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My Way or Yours

I watched you build
walls within your castle,
that closed the door
between your world and mine.

I waited for the tides of love
to wash away your efforts.
You were smarter than I thought,
for the tides never reached
boundaries of your kingdom.

I knew only one other way to reach you
with hope that you would forgive me,
when I destroyed your world
with the bulldozer of my love.

Can you hear my engine roar?

(I will free you with my love!)

Copyright 2002 Tracey L.Hardie


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Reviewed by Roger Ochs 10/9/2002
I'm with Peggy
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 10/8/2002
Whoa! This rocks and I do hear you my friend. :)

Love, Janet xoxoxo
Reviewed by E T Waldron 10/8/2002
Wow Tracey! you don't mess around;-) Great write!
Reviewed by John Reilly (Reader) 10/8/2002
he is in for trouble!
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) 10/8/2002
Enjoyed this bulldozing write--wonderfully strong expression of love!!
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci 10/8/2002
Hi Tracey,
Thank you for your comments on my poem!
I really like this, especially the strong ending!

Reviewed by Trixie Love 10/8/2002
Hi Tracey;
I love this write...
Excellent once again..

Thanks again for your kind comments.. :)
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 10/8/2002
This is wonderful work Tracey and you are as lovely outside as in, beautiful pic in your bio!
Reviewed by Drkman (Reader) 10/8/2002
Nice write and i agree teh perfect copmbination of words and pic.
Reviewed by Drkman (Reader) 10/8/2002
The pic and words are so perfect together! Very well done
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader) 10/8/2002
Of course i can hear your engines roar
you are right next to me. Oh wait a second!!
Dam!!! don't you just hate when sand gets in the wrong spots.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 10/8/2002
very unique poem, tracey!! enjoyed this!!
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