|Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
|Amber, You have a heart full of gold. Even after the darkness you still wish him well. I didn't know you back then but I know you now and you are the light that shines so bright. Farewell to the past...Take care my sweet spirit sister! Hugs, Chessly|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|and so we do evolve, but, i get the bittersweet of it, too--well expressed!|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|A very fine writing, Viv. However you will always be loved by someone. I know because I am still alive.
Peace and Love
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Thank you for sharing so deeply, Amber. First-class, Lady:)
|Reviewed by D. Vegas
|Amber, I believe letting go to someone you
vowed to love is one of life's hardest things.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Wham bam Amber wo.man, my ex has recently done the same thing, poor bloke.
He's history, her mystery. Time for fun fun fun.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Brave and honest poem Amber, I can understand how you feel,for whomever has loved,we cannot forget the experience,and lie about
our feelings, healing comes with truth! Well done!...ET
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|The past is always a part of us no matter what..new directions are there for us~we must take us where the wind blows.
Love and Blessings,
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|This poem is definitely you, Amber, a loving, caring,
talented human being with a future of your own to build
a happy life around. With love, gene.
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Your beautiful honesty is movingly revealed in these verses Amber. You are entitled to have memories... and to have a future too. Be well!
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Lovely poem sweet lady....your heart is so beautiful...sighhh...stay safe and well...Hugss|
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|you share years and children, there will always be a place for him in your heart. Your heart is big enough and kind enough to still include him.|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|SAD AND BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!! WISH YOU HAPPINESS, AMBER!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
Peace, Love and Lightness.
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|most people do not take the commitment to marriage litely, you are one. That's why you had the weekend you did. However, you used the word bitter/sweet. The weekend was sweeter than you think! Love, Morgan|
|Reviewed by Michael Guy
|40 years is a long time, but of course the memories can seem like yesterday; the best part he left you: your daughter! You're a lucky gal no matter how you spin it...
To your bright future: michael xx
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|As always, writing will help you to accomplish it. I think you were wise to write this poem. We can't erase memories, but we can put them in their place and move on.
Nicely written farewell--keep looking to the future.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|You may say goodbye but no matter what he will always be a part of you...you can't say goodbye to memories, good or bad.
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|My ex-wife got engaged a month ago.
She called me to tell me about it...perhaps...because...
Who else cares about her?
But freedom is a never ending discovery.
Peace- deep peace.
|Reviewed by Debby & Gordon Rosenberg
|ya, I'm with Jerry on this...you haven't let it go...|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Nope. You do not bid him farewell. He is still in your heart. I am sorry if what I said offends you, but your poem proved this truth, Amber.|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|This is an exquisite poem Amber, so tender, so personal, and full of your kindness and generosity of spirit.