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| Reviewed by Chessly Nesci |
5/26/2011 |
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| Amber, You have a heart full of gold. Even after the darkness you still wish him well. I didn't know you back then but I know you now and you are the light that shines so bright. Farewell to the past...Take care my sweet spirit sister! Hugs, Chessly |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/19/2011 |
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| and so we do evolve, but, i get the bittersweet of it, too--well expressed! |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
5/18/2011 |
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A very fine writing, Viv. However you will always be loved by someone. I know because I am still alive.
Peace and Love
Tony |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
5/18/2011 |
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Thank you for sharing so deeply, Amber. First-class, Lady:)
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
5/18/2011 |
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Amber, I believe letting go to someone you
vowed to love is one of life's hardest things.
Always,
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
5/17/2011 |
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Wham bam Amber wo.man, my ex has recently done the same thing, poor bloke.
He's history, her mystery. Time for fun fun fun. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/17/2011 |
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Brave and honest poem Amber, I can understand how you feel,for whomever has loved,we cannot forget the experience,and lie about
our feelings, healing comes with truth! Well done!...ET |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
5/17/2011 |
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The past is always a part of us no matter what..new directions are there for us~we must take us where the wind blows.
Love and Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
5/16/2011 |
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This poem is definitely you, Amber, a loving, caring,
talented human being with a future of your own to build
a happy life around. With love, gene. |
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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
5/16/2011 |
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Your beautiful honesty is movingly revealed in these verses Amber. You are entitled to have memories... and to have a future too. Be well!
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
5/16/2011 |
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| Lovely poem sweet lady....your heart is so beautiful...sighhh...stay safe and well...Hugss |
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| Reviewed by Don Juan Amante |
5/16/2011 |
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| you share years and children, there will always be a place for him in your heart. Your heart is big enough and kind enough to still include him. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
5/16/2011 |
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| SAD AND BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!! WISH YOU HAPPINESS, AMBER!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/15/2011 |
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Amber,
You ARE
Peace, Love and Lightness.
In admiration,
John |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
5/15/2011 |
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| most people do not take the commitment to marriage litely, you are one. That's why you had the weekend you did. However, you used the word bitter/sweet. The weekend was sweeter than you think! Love, Morgan |
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| Reviewed by Michael Guy |
5/15/2011 |
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40 years is a long time, but of course the memories can seem like yesterday; the best part he left you: your daughter! You're a lucky gal no matter how you spin it...
To your bright future: michael xx |
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| Reviewed by Connie Faust |
5/15/2011 |
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As always, writing will help you to accomplish it. I think you were wise to write this poem. We can't erase memories, but we can put them in their place and move on.
Nicely written farewell--keep looking to the future.
Connie |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/15/2011 |
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You may say goodbye but no matter what he will always be a part of you...you can't say goodbye to memories, good or bad.
fee |
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| Reviewed by John Bidwell |
5/15/2011 |
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My ex-wife got engaged a month ago.
She called me to tell me about it...perhaps...because...
Who else cares about her?
But freedom is a never ending discovery.
Peace- deep peace.
John |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
5/15/2011 |
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| ya, I'm with Jerry on this...you haven't let it go... |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
5/15/2011 |
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| Nope. You do not bid him farewell. He is still in your heart. I am sorry if what I said offends you, but your poem proved this truth, Amber. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
5/15/2011 |
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This is an exquisite poem Amber, so tender, so personal, and full of your kindness and generosity of spirit.
Blessings, xx
Christine |
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