|Reviewed by Richard Bowers
|The elements of your poetry capture the oldest of transcending and for that I have a glimpse of life passing, between sunsets and dawns. Great work!|
|Reviewed by Ed J.
|The comfort of love and peace at sleep. Wonderful write. while one sleeps is a special time to feel and whisper of love.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Awesome. Love it. Liz|
|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|was that you???? ;-) lovely poem you wrote here-very romantic|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Passion is a conscious mate and adventurer Sheila. You reveal the mysteries it assays with prominence. Satisfaction is a master we bow to when our heart is on fire for that special person in our lives. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|I like this poem and layout, Sheila|
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Warm and voluptuous words, Sheila. This is penetrating, even through the shape you chose for your poem.
|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|Oh this is lovely, Sheila. So soft, sensual, and ever so dreamy. Very well done.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|Beautiful, romantic, soft, sensuous and emotive. I loved this gentle touch and felt the moment. Well done my friend. Hugs, Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|romantic......we are guided by your short lines to a beautiful finale, it is gentle and soft|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Wow...I become mesmerized by the satin of these words.
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|This is a sweetly touching romantic poem. You always offer the best.
Much peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Your poetry is a treasure to read
Most enjoyable write
Love & Peace be with you
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|there is a calm to this and a heat...perhaps the tension of ...wanting a little more....great write. ~ Morgan|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|This is as beautifully romantic and sensuous as it gets!!!! Stunning poetry, Sheila.....
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|FANTASTIC IMAGERY AND PHRASES IN THIS WORK. ENJOYED AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my..very lovely writing sweet lady...Hugsss|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Smokes, this nearly blew my hard...............drive!
Such beauty, indeed very sensuous and subtly tantalising.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Oh sigh, it does not get more deeply beautiful than this...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|I thought I was tracking you. I am now.
This is exotic to the nth, Sheila. Each line was bolder than the last and, like your breath, it continued raising expectations. Great sensuous read.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|You excel in reaching a climax with soft tender words|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|All I can "say" is whomever this is for is one lucky individual. Wow! Sheila, this is beautiful and soft and I thank you for sharing it. Love and hugs and best wishes,
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Another gem of a write, Sheila,
calm, intimate, sensuous and erotic
with the overriding feelings
of love and contentment.
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|A beautiful cascade of words overflowing with tender thoughts,a love poem with depth and intense feelings. In other words... Fantastic! Loved it! Joy L. Hale|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Very beautiful expression of passion for the one you love. Well done Shiela, great capture of the night.
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Goodness me oh my ... "As You Sleep" is the work of someone re-focused and energized. Affirmation and acceptance exudes from between the lines of this lovely waterfall of words Sheilafriend. Deftly you bless the reader with honeyed grace and deeper shades of your multi-faceted creative endowments. That's kinda like poetic cleavage. Haha (-:
Yur friend ... richard
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Such a wonderfully soft way of expressing desire!
The style you have chosen in this poem really helps grow the breathlessness and energy. Love it!