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| Reviewed by J Howard |
7/8/2011 |
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Definately a truth. writing the truth is much more difficult then it looks. Well done
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| Reviewed by Ida Streeter |
7/6/2011 |
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Use to think it was just a song,but love truly IS better the second time around. We both know that.
The poem is so sweet, written by a truely sweet girl.Keep writing Honey.
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/4/2011 |
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| WOW!...THIS WORK REMINDS ME OF THAT TIMELESS CLASSIC SONG SUNG BY DINAH WASHINGTON, ENTITLED; 'WHAT A DIFFERENCE A DAY MAKES'. PLEASE GO ON LINE AND LISTEN TO IT AND I AM SURE YOU WILL UNDERSTAND WHAT I MEAN. GOD BLESS YOU AND YOURS AND THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING. LOVE & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
6/30/2011 |
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This is awesome thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
6/14/2011 |
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Glad to see that 5:00 PM has a bright new ring to it.
Like the form, like the words, like the poem, Joy.
-gene |
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| Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader) |
6/13/2011 |
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| lovely write joy...5pm home life things to do,,,and wonderful things to sharre. keep going my friend, anna |
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| Reviewed by George Dominguez |
6/12/2011 |
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| 5PM and a new life begins. Thats sounds about right. Whenever your husband gets home life starts over for you every day. Wonderful poem Joy. God Bless. George AKA THE WISE OLD OWL |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/10/2011 |
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Great outlook on the new situation; I can completely relate to this, Joy. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
6/9/2011 |
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| Excellent emotions in this expression. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
6/9/2011 |
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When old time has new meaning, Joy,
the world turns fresh and loving.
A delight of a poem.
John |
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| Reviewed by pat medlin |
6/9/2011 |
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| this just paints a smile....so nice to read |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
6/9/2011 |
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| Wow. What a pick me up for starting a new life. Such hope and excitement. Love it. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
6/9/2011 |
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Joy,
How precious this..with so many divorces going on. I hope your love with this new man will stay in both your hearts forever.
Blessings,
~Linda |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
6/9/2011 |
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Nothing like new beginnings, Joy! I truly felt connected to this one! Well done....
Anna |
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| Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa |
6/9/2011 |
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| Well written. Thanks. |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
6/9/2011 |
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| Yes its a beautiful feeling ... sighhh...Breathtaking sweet lady...Hugsss |
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
6/9/2011 |
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| Excellent piece, Joy |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/9/2011 |
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| New beginnings are often truly wonderful. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/8/2011 |
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| It's so nice to have a man around the house. Good luck |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
6/8/2011 |
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Pure contentment.
It does make a difference coming home to an empty place, as such a place is internal. |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
6/8/2011 |
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Tic Toc
"5:00 p.m."
~Lady Joy~
This is a
delight
to read!!!
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
6/8/2011 |
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| and as the song says..... "It's five o'clock somewhere." Nicely done Joy. Thanks Dick |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
6/8/2011 |
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Words spoken wonderfully indeed an excellent write Laura
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| Reviewed by James Johnston |
6/8/2011 |
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| A delightful reminder or peaceful existence. So glad you are still reliving 5:00 PM with him. Jim |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
6/8/2011 |
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This radiates bliss!
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
6/8/2011 |
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| Hey! Hey! Hey! I love it. Happy for you. |
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