|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|BRAVO! ARISE FROM THE DARK, DEEP DEPTHS OF HER WATERY GRAVE...USE THE FATHER'S WINGS AND FLY! FLY...UP! FLY...INTO THE WARMTH, ENERGY AND BRILLANCE OF THE SUN...SOAR! AND BE FREE! LEAVE HER SEARCH...FOR ONLY WHEN YOU ARE GONE, WILL SHE REALIZE THE 'DEPTHS' OF HER LOSS. A REMARKABLE WORK. I WAS WITH YOU THROUGH EVERY LINE AND I APPLAUDED WHEN YOU ESCAPED. GOD BLESS AND THANKS FOR SHARING THIS TREASURE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|There's a sense of being caught-up and coming full circle to this defining moment. Some very beautiful lines in this work, Amor, as usual. A couple of my faves are "left on the coral shelf of your kingdom" - a wonderful way to express feeling taken for granted, and "to stay and sew your torn horizons" - such a sense of being meant for more than that. Great writing!
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|you'll be back....remember free don't last
and the waters can get pretty cool out there alone :))
enjoyed this very much glad i sleek,shinny and black-self dropped in
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|a mystical underworld.....where nautical power prevails......~ Morgan|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|I remember this Amor. A bit different offering. You show us the dark side of seduction as perfectly as the joyful side.|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|you really thought that it was my place
to stay and sew your torn horizons
so that I shall sit at your fatherís table
making small talk with the watery night
... this is an amazing transformative stanza and I love the concepts and images you paint: wateriness and torn horizons work well together. You build charged emotions turning, heaving and changing so well in this mythical presentation, Amor. Neptune's Daughter is a strong force to be reckoned with and an enchanting title for a poem. xx
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Wonderfully written as always, Amor.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|The tantalizing sea we come from. It begs us to come, but we cannot stay. Neptune's daughter awaits, as does Davy Jones locker.
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Your poem radiates
courage of convictions
and the depth of you
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Exceptional way of seeing, Amor,
the setting alone is exceptional
and the notion of this relationship
elevated well above mundane to exotic and deep
(literally and metaphorically);
a scene worthy of 'The Tempest'
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Absolutely Beautiful as I fade into your words Amor.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|i always look forward to your poetry. classic and intriguing. marvelous, i wish i could have penned it.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Powerful offering....I think I remember this one!!
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|A deep and powerful write. Joy L. Hale|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Incredibly complex and profound ~ exquisite poetic expression!
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Awesome writing sweet man...stay safe and well...Hugss|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Amor your poetic charm just radiates throughout this magnificent poem. I love your work lately, there is a stronger more balanced poet writing from deeply within.
Much peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|