|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|AN HONEST OFFERING TO A POOR, SEARCHING HEART THAT IS UNWISELY INCLINED TO ACCEPT... A 'TEMPORARY FIX'...UNTIL THE REAL THING COMES ALONG. WELL DONE, DON AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Always you send to me, a delightful energy that surges right where you want it to go. This feels so good to read this poem. I love the format and the intensity of your words.
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Carried me to the point
and then expanded my visions
mesmerizing with what can be
|Reviewed by Tiana ~
|That's where I screwed up! lol Wonderfully written and so very true. It's nice to dream and fantasize but it doesn't beat a flesh and blood lover. Loved the format and this is a keeper! aloha from Hawaii, DJ!|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Very creative work of romance DJ. Bravo|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|The most tender words I have ever READ in my life and so true....your heart is singing... and I can hear it so very loud...sighhh ...and once again you have taken my breath completly away with this masterpiece sweet Juan....every line I can feel believe me deep very deep within this heart and soul....Hugss ... be safe and well OK
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!! '...With kisses that help you forget the lies other lips have told'....'no imaginary lips can kiss away cold pain you carry inside your warm heart'.....'let me be the fantasy who kisses away you tears'-------MOST TALENTED, GOLDEN SENTENCES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|Don't flip this poem around it's perfect. ~ Morgan|
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|A lovely dream well done indeed Laura
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|"...with kisses that help you forget
the lies other lips have told.."
is just perfect, the quintessential
expression of romance and of love..
and that closing phrase is a clincher.
Gorgeous writing, DJ, gorgeous.
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|A beautiful look into the heart of romance; a fantasy lover to bring warmth to a womans cold lips. Just lovely. Joy L. Hale|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|A fantasy with a whole lot of truth in it.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Jazzy and profound at once!
This is a poetic treat, DJ.