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A Tunnel Without Light
by D. L. Vegas

Friday, September 02, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Darkened all around her
She couldn't see her hands
Panic started to rise
She tried to speak
A tightness in her vocal chords
Feeling detached,
Her body was no longer hers...
There was bleakness all around
It touched her whole being
Pushing her deeper
Darkness, a tunnel without light
Trying to crawl her way out
The darkness would not allow
All she wanted was to sleep forever... ...

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Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 9/6/2011
So eloquently describes the horror of depression!!! Such a nightmare! Thanks for sharing this well-penned poem!

Reviewed by Christine Volkoff 9/4/2011
Anyone who can live through this, come out of it and smile again, has to be incredibly strong. "Feeling detached, her body was no longer hers"...precise and profound.
Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat 9/4/2011

A beautiful but sad write about the monster of depression.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen 9/3/2011
You capture this brilliantly, Deborah!!!
Great writing ~ just hope it's not auto-biographical.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 9/3/2011
Sounds like you have captured the depth of depression and what it feels like to be in that place...I know I was there.
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 9/2/2011
I have heard of this until someone or something calls you back, scary. Great write.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

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