|Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
|a wonderful write vivian...one would like to fly sometimes and forget...blessings and keep going my friend, anna
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
I must say this is extraordinary poetry. You have captured a feeling of lightness. Through your unique style and imagination you captured my attention and heart. Loved this one!
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|wow and WOW....this is fabulous poetry, you had me with every word..riveting...I think there is an elephant in the room..time to fly...no they will never catch you!!!
Love and Blessings,
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL, VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|This is a marvelous poetic journey!
My favorite of yours... I really love this!
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|wonderful imagination and of course with wine...you've made it rockkk, Vivian... :)neerja|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|I love it, even though I can detect just a trace of dissappointment? in life it still is lighthearted enough with the wine to make it a great story.
|Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
|I suppose we all have elephants in the room and betrayal is a big beast. Not sure an afternoon melange is the answer.
On a lighter note: Dumbo can!
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|A delightful imagination in this great poem well done indeed Laura
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Hah! This poem reminds me of an old Credence Clearwater Revival song, "Looking Out My Backdoor."
"Tambourines and elephants
are playin in the band.
Won't you take a ride on the
flyin spoon doot doo doo."
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Yes, Vivian, eanything can happen in a vivid imagination. -gene.|