Quagmire
by Ronald W. Hull
Sunday, October 16, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
 Share
 Print  Save  Become a Fan
Come, let me drag you down…
HaHaHaHaHaHaaaaggghhh! |
|
|
Quagmire
Help me, I am sinking,
down, down.
Help me, I am sliding,
no grip I have found.
To think I once cherished,
worshiped and adored,
solid ground.
I'm up to my ass,
in morass,
with no one to ask,
but myself.
I'm underwater my friend,
and will not bend,
like a reed,
in the swamp of success.
Get me up,
and get me out of here!
Before I disappear,
in the face of my fear.
Sucked down a hole,
as black as my goal,
to an endless universe.
So heed this verse,
or the underworld's curse,
will have you sinking too...
into the quagmire of your desire.
Copyright 2011 © Ronald W. Hull
10/11/11
|
|
More Horror
|
Want to review or comment on this
poem?
Click here to login!
Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!
|
| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
10/26/2011 |
|
| That's why I shop at the 99 cent store. Can't get into too much trouble there. Perhaps you should revise your goal before you reach the event horizon. Patrick |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/22/2011 |
|
| when "your up to your ass" you have to be real careful not to sink into that black hole ... a quagmire you may never return from ... |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/20/2011 |
|
You certainly provide substance to reflect upon with your verses here, Ron. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
10/19/2011 |
|
| ... ass... morass... bending over... desire?! Yep, this just about sums up the way of the corporate world and no mistake, dear Ron. Very tightly constructed, too! Can't see YOU kissing the rosy cheeks of material greed at any rate. Nice one! :)) xx |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
10/17/2011 |
|
| Ron, I can sense the desperation my dear friend -- once you are caught up in the vortex exit is very difficult, but possible -- fight on -- I bid you love and peace -- Jon Michael |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
10/17/2011 |
|
It's really scary how many are sinking into the dark, bottomless quagmire of debt in the world today.....and the rich keep getting richer.....Well done, Ronald!
Anna |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
10/16/2011 |
|
| I think I might be happy to just once see what it is like to sink into that black hole of money...I am tired of JUST surviving...e |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
10/16/2011 |
|
This has a swift and brilliant flow to it ~
Blessings,
Christine |
|
|
|
|
Bookmarks