|Reviewed by Mary Grace Patterson
|Great imagery and picture in first poem. The second poem is a wee bit baffling!...M|
|Reviewed by Janna Hill
|A clever write Patrick.
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Swirling the colors of patterns ~ interesting write Patrick
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Richard King
|This one might be a bit beyond me, but I'm trying to catch up.... pedaling fast... Dick|
|Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
|Actually I'm a bit lost on this one, Patrick, but I do want to let you know that I've been here.
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Very different....but I love it! Leaves one soul-searching! WEll done, Patrick!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Quite different, indeed; but quite thought provoking.|
|Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
|Thank you for sharing, Paztrick. The story your poem tells sounds all too familiar. I've had to deal with Narcissus' in my life, and also the Narcissus I often become.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Thank you for sharing this meaningful and thought-awakening write, Patrick. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|leave Narcissus to Narcissus,and choose life! have missed your fine writing,Patrick!etw|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|A yellow rose of friendship for our clever Patrick!!
Not to befall the fate of a Narcissus!!!
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Enjoyable! Very nicely done, Patrick.|