|Reviewed by Oisín Breen
|he is a definite poet. Definitly incredibly talented very very much so. Tell him he should keep doing it and explore his soul. Let him read write and be the most crazy wild social cat in all of the world. That reads like it was written by at least an 18 year old if not older it has the freshness of youth and the wisdom of youth|
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Through the mouths of babes! :) I, also, have had the thrill and joy of postng a couple of pieces from each of my daughters at my site of origin!! The beaming smiles and glowing eyes of each enriched my spirit and the love I felt for those who replied so sweetly!
I look at titles when I decide what to read from the author's here, Orphan Pebble grabbed my eyes, Adam is very astute with his title and his sense in the piece, give him a hug for me!!
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|OH MY oh my, he needs his own page. Great work. Floria|
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|That was just beautiful...he should post here!!!!|
|Reviewed by Tim Mullane
|Well done Adam, look forward to more poetry
from you on this site.
|Reviewed by Mark Mahoney
|Takes after you Katy, a gift for saying what one see's and hears and speaks from the heart, this is very well done. sorry i've not been about i was not to well these last few weeks, but i'm getting there...take care of you and yours, lovely well honest write, thanks for sharing it with us all here, take care..Mark xx|
|Reviewed by Roger Ochs
|Adam - We are each a pebble fallen from the cosmos yet still a part of it.|
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|This is beautifully done--wise perception...
Please tell Adam "thank you" for sharing his poetry and thank you, too, Katy, for posting it for us. Wonderful originality and creativity--yup...just like his Mama!
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Adam, sees, and knows, a lot more than we think.
Good one Adam....
|Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
|Excellent poem. Adam is a great observer.|
|Reviewed by Calendula Petal
|thankgoodness he posted or this most lovely piece would not have been seen.|
|Reviewed by Larry Skahill (Reader)
|sounds like he is a pebble off the old mountain - if you know what I mean|
|Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
|Katydid, tell Adam that this poem is beautiful. I love the peaceful feeling of a mountain inside a pebble. Very nice.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|now i see where adam gets his talent from..his mom. great write he did!! thanks for sharing this!! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)|
|Reviewed by megan t
|it's a beautiful poem.. I am very glad he decided to share that