Eve reached out her hand
she could almost touch it
shiney, tempting, juicy
Knowledge, understanding, answers
she could hardly contain
'Adam', come see
"taste this with me'
'Desire?', Adam raised an eyebrow
'Desire?' piqued an arousal
from his relaxation, posed
He stood, erect and held her hand
'how about, this time, this world...'
'We stay in the garden, and
top - title "New Earth" artist unknown
bottom - title "The Journey" artist/author Lawrence Spencer
Music - The River's Gonna Run
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|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
Who knows what they were really thinking. Excellent.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Sometimes I wonder just how much we really know...A great thought provoker, Deb!|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Appetites existed way before they knew how to be satisfied, Debby! Or were they satisfied until a new desire emerged? The potential was there whatever. Mind you, I think dancing is the answer to everything, both before and after; starters and dessert! Mouthwatering write, Debby! :)) xx|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|A harboring take on the first couple in that marvelous laboratory where the Most High created them. peace to you ... richard|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Love the picture and "Desire" takes on an exciting meaning.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|Must have been some dance holding her hand erect ;)|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|. . . and not know the release of that desire, Debby?|