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At a Complete loss
by jing javier

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Your beauty intoxicates
All you encounter,
Yet you fail to notice,
This is your blunder

You've had a rough time,
Though now it should be over,
But yet you continue
Clinging to what is left over,

And in doing this your depression grows deeper,
Pulling you apart at the seams,
Causing you to unravel and fall to you knees,
Pondering desperately: "How much worse can it be? "

When all of your friends have been with you till now,
But here comes the crossroads up ahead,
They give you a choice:
"Stand tall or fall down."

You have your beauty and charm,
Your intelligence and grace,
Good friends and your health,
What more, for you, does it takes?






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Reviewed by Josephine Bohen 10/15/2002
i have to concur with roger
great write
josie
Reviewed by Gumby Pokey (Reader) 10/15/2002
powerful message I hope it is heard
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 10/15/2002
REALLY GOOD
Reviewed by Roger Ochs 10/15/2002
I want it all and I want it now.
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 10/14/2002
Very nice jing!
Jack
Reviewed by jude forese 10/14/2002
outstanding...
Reviewed by E T Waldron 10/14/2002
Powerful writing...well done!
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 10/14/2002
sometimes, it takes a little push from a good friend. :) Nice write
Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan 10/14/2002
Good write....I am at a complete loss now..
Jenni
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 10/14/2002
Sometimes it's all about tough love! Gotta hold up your head and press on....Strong write Jing, Ty Dani :)

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