Silent Valentine's Message
by Amber V Moonstone
Tuesday, February 14, 2012
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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I was inspired to write this tonight, even though I am exhausted from working.
Silent Valentine's Message
by Amber "V" Moonstone
Within Teardrops that fall,
for each silent kiss,
your heart is tender
your voice I dearly miss.
Within moonbeams that glow,
for each silent caress,
your hand is ever so steady
my mind in a state of undress.
Within starlight that twinkles,
for each silent moan,
your smile is ever so gentle,
it brings me home.
Within magical energy that flows,
for each silent night,
your mind is ever so clear,
our love is so right.
Within moments that bleed into days,
for each silent word,
your poetry is ever stimulating,
a silent profession that is clearly heard.
Within days that turn into months,
for each silent week,
my love grows stronger
come take a peak!
Silent Valentine's Message (c) Amber "V" Moonstone
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|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|So tender and caressing, Amber, like the constant and faithful wings of peace and solace itself. Surely this lilting and beautiful offering enfolds the soul it cares for so deeply and warms the heart and mind of the one so invited, loved and protected. The tone and build are like waves forever lapping your shared spiritual shores and there is a persuasiveness in the recurring "within"s. A golden "silence" here! :)) xx|
|Reviewed by Janna Hill
|"a silent profession that is clearly heard." I like that, as well as your write on Heart of Silence. Guess I'm in a place of reflection and direction. Hope you are feeling better.
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|Aamber, I of course, love the color here! pink is perfect and hardly silent.....come take a peak indeed....how do you write something so awesome after work?.....well done. Happy Valentine's a day, late. ~ Morgan|
|Reviewed by Donna Chandler
|A touching look at love lost, with a beautiful picture to add grace to the thoughtful words.
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Magical and sweet your Valentine heart. Lovely written.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|And YOU * Amber V * have a very
rare beautiful Valentine Heart!!!
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|So beautifully written and heartfelt Amber, as always your poetry is truly amazing Laura
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I peeked into your poem and found it lovely.
Sometimes we do our best work when we are stressed to the limit.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|such lovely words for a tired gal goes a long way in my book ...|
|Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE
|Even when you are a-weary your voice is magnificent, your muse appassionato, your tone touching, endearing and inspiring. A belated happy Valentine's Day to you, dear Amber.
Peace always, inside and out, above and below, through and through,
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
What a timely write for Valentine's day. Beautiful.
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson