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The Boundaries of Creation
by Elisabeth Barstowe
Thursday, February 16, 2012
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The boundaries of creation
is blinded by sight
to the laws of creation
and all of its might.

There is no greater sorrow
than a word enslaved
and no greater confusion
than the word in cage.

These lines that I write
are the shards that I pick
from my soul.

They're tears
and laughter,
they're sorrow
and joy.

They make up
the true meaning of me,
my thoughts
my knowledge
my philosophy.

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Reviewed by Pierre Ortega	4/23/2012

These are much more than just thoughts, these words are the essence of you. enjoyed reading this Pierre




Reviewed by Joy Hale	2/16/2012

Pithy words of mind and thought, intellect and philosophy; a most worthy poem of your inner feelings. Joy L. hale




Reviewed by Jerry Bolton	2/16/2012

I like your shards. I have my own. They seem to reflect back to yours. Enslaved? Sometimes I feel that. Then I realize I have a functioning (still) brain. That can unslave us. Cage? Same philosophy as enslaved, our brain (functioning) can break the doors of the cage. And then . . . we look around and realize (maybe) that we have only opened a door to a much larger cage. I adore poems that grab my intellect. This one did.

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