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  Wednesday's Ash
by Douglas W Bentley
Wednesday, February 22, 2012
Rated "PG" by the Author.

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Wednesday’s Ash

 

I come

I crawl

Across the ember’s of Wednesday’s ash

I’m ashamed

I hide my remorse

Don’t just mark my forehead

But cover my whole body instead

 

I come

I fast

Trembling in the fire of the daily dash

Out to a wilderness

I find the grazing of a horse

With its stillborn colt lay lying there dead

And I feel obligated to bury it in a flowery bed

(with no parting words said. . . . . . .)

 

Forty days

Away

I will climb the steepest mountain

Dive into the deepest fountain

Feast on the sweetest angel’s bread

And bring to remembrance every word YOU said

 

To avoid the yoke is easy

Working in tandem difficult

Trusting with conditions isn’t trusting at all

Obeying by fear isn’t scared of being called

When it’s easier to fall

And lie there crying - doing nothing at all. . . . .

 

Scattered across this vast universe

With twinkling stars

That encase and strengthen the foundation

With golden solid rebar. . . . . . . . .

 

. . . . . So I come

I crawl.

In the end this body is just dust after-all.

 

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Reviewed by Christine Alwin 3/20/2012
I find myself immersed in your words, riveting beauty~
Reviewed by Axilea MU 3/5/2012
Impressive! The atmosphere and word choice are very effective in this poem, and one can strongly feel the universal questions regarding shame, guilt, remorse, redemption...

Axilea
Reviewed by E T Waldron 2/29/2012
Awesome Douglas! I really feel blessed after reading this!Thanks for sharing!

ET
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 2/23/2012
well said
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 2/22/2012
You gave Grace a wonderful present for Ash Wednesday. I will keep this and share it every year. Thank you for reaching eacg weord to pen it here for all of us. This is most beautiful Douglas!
Love,
Susan
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 2/22/2012
A divine and authentically written poem, and so true that all things in this physical universe eventually do become this quiet dust, this poignant reminder to live fully each day.
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by richard cederberg 2/22/2012
"Feast on the sweetest angel’s bread" I dig this phrase Doug - Gives new meaning to breaking bread together. I like the message and flow of your thoughts- a vivifying waterfall. Good stuff poet ... richard
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