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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
9/25/2012 |
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| Well said.. i truely wish that sometimes we could turn back the hands of the clock!...M |
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| Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams |
8/19/2012 |
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| Score! and I agree with Steve, and Ron and whoever else, I would break that dang rewind button. Well done Asa, well done. Be well, Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Steve Ralph |
6/7/2012 |
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Nicely put, but like Ronald Hull my life would be spent hitting the rewind button.
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
4/15/2012 |
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THERE IS NOT ONE HUMAN BEING ALIVE WHO CANNOT RELATE TO THIS WORK...WE HAVE ALL DONE THINGS THAT WE WISH WE COULD FIX BY REWINDING OUR LIVES AND DOING IT OVER. WELL DONE, SON...SO WELL DONE! THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Suzie Palmer |
3/23/2012 |
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Honest and true..... Great to meet you here Dear Asa!!!
Love and Gratitude,
Suzie xox :-) |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
3/21/2012 |
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Oh yes indeed my friend we all wish that most times as this sure is a write we all can relate to and the photo suits this perfectly Laura
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/19/2012 |
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| succinct thought provoker ... |
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| Reviewed by Michael Jones |
3/19/2012 |
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| What we be is what others see thank God for forgiveness. Apatly written! Peace!!! |
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| Reviewed by Ruan Burke |
3/19/2012 |
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Of course! That's what we need! You hit the nail right on the head.
We could put sooo much to rights. |
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| Reviewed by Carol Mitchell |
3/18/2012 |
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| Yes, we do! |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
3/18/2012 |
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| simply stated. great poem. |
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| Reviewed by T Jett |
3/12/2012 |
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| I wish I could sometimes, Asa. A great write! :) |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
3/10/2012 |
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| It is a shame one cannot still pause and rewind...mistakes could be dubbed over with successes without having to repeat them |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/10/2012 |
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Your poem is so well written! My thoughts and prayers are with you,and I hope you continue to post your poems here.
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by pat medlin |
3/10/2012 |
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procative is a weak word to use for these words...and my knee-jerk reaction is to say a soft tentative...'maybe'
for if i did a rewind past the 'good bad ugly uglier and downright dirtydog' parts i wouldn't have much to have learned from...and less to put to paper
welcome to AD...i look forward to reading more...pmedlin |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
3/10/2012 |
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OMG! Loved the picture...it says so much...and your words resonate the thoughts of this reader for certain...keep writing, Asa, and keep moving forward....
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd |
3/9/2012 |
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A few sharp words that say a lot.
I hope you will soon recover from your disappointment in love. It's a great big world out there. Rainbows |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
3/6/2012 |
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| You say much with few words Asa, bless you! |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
3/6/2012 |
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Asa
If you want to be a real life all action figure you have to stop depending on your own resources, and turn to God for his infinite resources
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/5/2012 |
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Substance to reflect upon, Asa. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
3/5/2012 |
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I'd be so busy rewinding I wouldn't have a life. Groundhog Day all over again.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Janna Hill |
3/5/2012 |
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To be able to pause and rewind... Yeah, I think most people can relate Asa.
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
3/5/2012 |
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Welcome to the Ad Asa. To embrace the reality of actions.
well done ~ wishing you the best for your writing career.
Lady Mary Ann |
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