|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|wow...with all due respects i do believe your poetry has seduced me with its words-well done|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|men are built to be so strong, and they are
but woman have the undeniable strength to weaken them
a fabulous offering showing the "Ashes Of Seduction"
Candles Kissed by Mooning Stars
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Wow! I really got into this!! Bravo!!|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|Intensity is woven into each line. One can certainly feel "lured to a home falsely called" (brilliant line). Powerfully written. ~Best, Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks
|This is simply transcending writing-amazing intricate, wise, longing emotional and moving. Such a treasure here. Will read more.|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Excellent the use of imagery in this leaving a series of vignettes upon my miagination. Well done.|
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|I can smell the walls of ash, this lured me right into every image. Clever. ~ Morgan|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Beauty in your portrayal of a warrior heart.
Brilliant piece Pat.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Wow! Fascinating imagery you've cleverly painted here, Pat!!! Very nicely done!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You write of a universal and timeless theme, Pat. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|A classical, classy write. Smooth and seductive… Drew me in.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Awesome effect! This is most compelling Pat!
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Pat, Love your tittle and how you layed it out...
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Happens every single day, Pat. Men! We give out gender a bad name.|