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Joe and Mrs. Joe
by Diana J Legun

Monday, March 12, 2012
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Elderly couple togetherness.

Joe

Perhaps he doesn't hear,
sitting in the TV chair.
I think he doesn't see.
Looks like he's fast asleep to me.

Maybe he's too far away,
if he is in fact awake
to know what all we say.

As I curl her hair, she tells me
about how life is different 
now that he is old 
and so much went wrong.
He has become more needful
than the day is long.

She says she used to play
and go and play and go,
but those days are gone.

It's time for me to say good bye
and get back home.
I wave to his closed eyes,
not sure which one of them is more alone.
Perhaps he doesn't hear.

3/1/08 
djl

Mrs. Joe

Now I no longer do her hair.
She has none -- it's gone from chemotherapy.
Now she is more needful than he,
her Joe, and the reason her life got slow.

Until this, so she knits
right close to the fire stove;
there in the sock cap,
covering the no hair.

Joe seems more perky now.
No longer in his nap, new light in his eyes,
he sits up close next to his wife.

More had gone wrong for her somehow,
which seems to have brought him back
or she seems to have joined his space
and so...

to me they look much more together,
here in their new 'each other' place,
than separated by good health last year...
that gap closed by the difference twelve months can make.

3/8/09 
djl

 

 


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Reviewed by Diana Wiles 3/25/2012
Actually a not too rare happening...Sometimes out of the worst circumstances comes new beginnings...
Wistful and touching...
Hugs,
Diana...
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 3/13/2012
That is heart wrenching to read, but the case for so many. Lately I've been in great need, and it is very hard on my other half.

Ron
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 3/13/2012
Wonderful poetry about two people who were wandering around in disinterested land. Personal, physical problems was the healing balm which moved them into each others sphere and care. I liked this.
Reviewed by Asa Seeley 3/12/2012
...thru sickness and health, 'i do'. seems now, they both have gotten the message. thanks for sharing.


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