|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Really loved your transition all wrapped
up in a great poem *Jerry* as you are so
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Everything in life is about timing. You have expressed this fact so well. Love the way you wrote this, so vivid and meaningful.
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|The best things in life are worth waiting for....glad you found her!
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|flowed through this wonderful dance reading alongside this lucky place you are in. How true if we knew then what we knew know.|
|Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)
|The time was right for you, Jerry and I can strongly relate to your wonderfully written poem.|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|love this, Jerry. At least the journey teaches us to know when we've arrived! Tight, declarative prose in the signature Bolton style. xx|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|What experience teaches us.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|"sometimes, after a hot day
of moving on down the road
using the thumb dance
tired, eyes gritty and burning
still . . ."
great verse in this reflective and powerful poem ...
|Reviewed by Ruan Burke
|Appreciation never comes to us until later - we need to live and learn first.
Done the "Thumb dance" myself a few times - Good old days.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|"using the thumb dance"...gotta love this line for memories of those bygone days of thumbing everywhere...now no one picks anybody up, though I always feel a bit of twinge of regret that I cannot do so when driving by...e
|Reviewed by RWEHAVING FUN
|wonderful build up to a powerful close...
|Reviewed by Richard King
|I just love the way you turn a phrase. "...the thumb dance" was especially descriptive to one who has danced the dance, but I especially liked, "...tattooed under my eyelids." Such lines succinctly say so much. Good stuff, Jerry. Thanks Dick|
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Jerry, what a heartfelt and meaningful write well done indeed as the photo sure suits this poem perfectly Laura