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Entwined...
In the heat of the night
Two, dripping wet.
A preview of summer
Winter’s one last bet.
Embraced in insanity
Lovers entwined.
Together, they come
Together, they unwind.
In the heat of the night
Two bodies dripping wet.
A moment of sharing
Together, they met.
Deborah Ann Tornillo
Copyright, 2012
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
3/25/2012 |
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Brought me to a cold sweat. Seriously, a very hot moment expressed.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
3/25/2012 |
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I enjoyed this sensual piece very much...
Diana.. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/24/2012 |
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| captures a passionate moment nicely ... |
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| Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle |
3/23/2012 |
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...more intricacy is involved in these three small verses than their brevity betrays... more intimacy... more intensity... more of an inundation of innuendo... more than mere words conveys... and more, when "Together, they met" than meets the eye...
I love the sub-text you've created here, Deborah... one of your best! |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
3/23/2012 |
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Debby,
Very sensuous poem.
Mary |
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