Sharing The Night Together
by Laura Lee Fall
Saturday, March 24, 2012
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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As I do not want to leave this bed where we just shared magic you and I .
This feeling is so fine, as we took our time adoring one another.
The passion rose and there were many pleasurable moans as we lie here catching our breath, I tell you that was the best .
We now lay here and rest, snuggling close together, your body pressed firmly to mine as the feeling is so divine.
Wishing this night will last forever.
Morning comes, as there is such a glow and we know that all good things must come to an end, as we here our kids yell, “What’s for breakfast, mommy, daddy?
We both giggle as we get up to start another day, we also know there will be many more magical nights shared together.
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|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Slow and Intune!
Love your beautiful image
And your embrace of love
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|I just love the teasing of romantic moments and I can almost remember that sentiment clearly.|
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|AN ABSOLUTE GEM. SAYING SO MUCH...WITH JUST THE RIGHT WORDS THAT 'TOAST' YOUR THEME...PERFECTLY. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Nicely penned, Laura....Love is so much more than passion...the wonder of love...the comfort of closeness shared by two in love!
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|"...as we took our time"...
"...snuggling close together"
now that's the way to go!
warming, sensual and spiritual, Laura,
it's good indeed to read you again
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Nicely intertwined with a night of
romance that ends with family love,
*Laura* thanks for the sharing!!!!
|Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
|Once passion is spent, slow, leisurely loving is the best.
very nice, warm poem, Laura.
your friend, Mark
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Not a bad way to spend the nighttime, Laura, as you "took our time adoring one another"
Liked the photo too.
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
This definitely sounds heavenly magical..Miss this for sure..
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Lovely romantic fervor with a good morning from the kids !
Oh, yes Giggles !! Well done Laura.
Lady Mary Ann