|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I love the ambiance of intrigue and mystery in this, and your character is enticing as well. Thank you for sharing, Carole. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Love this you both
Enjoyed the "Sam spade touch"
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|oooo... what next?! This surely is just a taster... otherwise you're BOTH in trouble!! :)) As seamless as her well-turned stocking, you two! :)) Can't wait to see what lies beyond that fringe... xx|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|oh what fun! well done, carole & jon!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Excellent seamless,collab...I'm looking forward to the book! Wishing you both much success and happiness!
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Very nicely done...excellent collaboration on such a great theme|
|Reviewed by D. Vegas
|Carole, This is like a film of the forties, a beautiful dame and a
detective who doesn't know any better...Love it!
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Awesome!!!! Unfolds like a 40's movie! Loved the phrasing! Each verse wraps itself around the next....well done you two!
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|I love the perspective in this, so much fun!
Glorious collaborating, you guys!
Will there be more to come? I hope so, and the book...
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I felt like I was listening to an old radio narrative of a flat foot dick about to get an interesting case.
Jon Michael, she does wonders.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Excellent collab, Carole and Jon Michael!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|"...that husky polish
rubbed there by money"
ah, yes! and everything else
that goes with it - the disaster package
but such an enchanting alluring seductive
Congratulations to you both, Carole and Jon,
for this so well-written work
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Ah, I wrote a forties-gumshoe novel a couple of years ago just to get it out of my system. I called it Ram Slade (Sam Spade?). Hah! Turned out to be a pretty darn good book. This delightful collaboration put me in mind of it. Great poem!|
|Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
|If that's not background, or forefront for "Bogy". Your words bring the image immediately forward. What would this fashionably slinky broad want with a "Shamus", huh? The black bird possibly.
Good to hear from you again, Carole.