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A Dream, or Reality?
by Amber V Moonstone
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Sometimes when we want something so badly, we wonder if it is a dream, or if we are living in reality?


A Dream, or Reality?

by Amber "V" Moonstone
4/3/12 

Deeply moving sentiments

seeping within stardust dreams
longing for a moment
standing alone it seems.

 

Deeply centered emotions,
swirling like a storm,
longing for a moment
that is out of the norm.

 

Deeply thinking mind,
dazed and confused,
longing to understand,
all that is refused.

 

Deeply moving sentiments
filled with a stardust dream,
longing for your touch
that only you can redeem.

 

Deeply hungry heart
that feels the need,
to know if  this is a dream or reality,
that only you can feed? 

 

 

 

A Dream, or Reality? (c) Amber "V" Moonstone

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Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
honest sentiments expressed well!
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
I love this piece, and feel the authenticity and longing within your words!
We must dream instead of letting sadness settle in the heart.
There are so many unspoken messages flowing in between and around us it's difficult sometimes to discern...
Love,
Chris
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
dreams and reality are but two sides to one coin...
it seems that "longing to understand" never abates.
nice work, amber!
Reviewed by JMS Bell
I BELIEVE THAT EACH UNIQUELY SHAPED INDIVIDUAL IS INFUSED WITH A LITTLE BIT OF BOTH WORLDS...DREAMS AND REALITIES. I ALSO BELIEVE THAT ONLY ALMIGHTY GOD CAN FULFILL THE LONGINGS OF THEM BOTH. EXCELLENT WORK, AMBER. YOUR SHARINGS ALWAYS PROVOKE 'THOUGHTS'. THANK YOU. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
These are the best dreams–the ones to long for. I often get them in daydreams rather than the ones I wake up to the middle of the night.

Ron
Reviewed by jude forese
dreams have their own special appetite ... as long as we feel full from the experience, dreams and reality are basically the same ...

your kindle the fires of my mind and cook your thoughts well in this poem ...
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
In and Out of consciousness *Amber V*
You have captured an essence of it so
very well!!!!

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Without dreams...we have nothing and the heart is starved Excellent write, Amber
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
Amber, you lit on thin line here of dream or reality. Some of the dreams I have are more real than when I'm awake, the touches, etc. And it makes you sense the connectedness of it. Thank you for sharing this, Amber. Always loved your writing mystique... ;P

In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Diana Wiles
The world would be a very sad place without our dreams...they are often the strong motivators in our lives...they are our Hope for the future...and keep us going when times are tough..
Lovely poem Amber,
Hugs, Diana...
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
...a fine line, I think dreams and reality can be one of the same...I get so confused myself at times~
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
This is so rooted and grounded in an authentic depth of feeling, Amber, that it hits (in its gentle way) like a thunderbolt. I love the perfect metre and rhyme you have expressed your sentiments in: so compelling yet lyrical. How well you have kept the tension here between that "confusion" that swirls like a twister in your heart and the objective clarity that is still in touch with a perceived reality, hence being anchored. We all have such a question somewhere and who knows? When dreams and reality are separated by nothing more than a sheer spiritual membrane that could be penetrated at any given instant? Even if time and place are actually adrift, spirits occupy the same moment. One of your very best for certain sure. Love it! :)) xx
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Deeply centered emotions knowing that reality of a stardust dream.
Wonderful lyrical poem Amber.
Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Laura Fall
A very moving poem Amber, written so touching and heartfelt Laura
Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Amber,
your superbly stated vision speaks of knowing the two are ocassionaly one and the same at least to our mind. I wish you ecstatic confirmation in either realm.
Budd
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
all the great motivational speakers see it and believe it. You can't obtain a goal unless you can envision it. careful with those daydreams.....I don't want have to go far to pick you up. :)
Reviewed by John Flanagan
..if one is the other then we're lucky
and blessed; sadly, they don't often
meet.
Amber, you have vision.

john
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Very moving, beautifully written poem,Amber!You have experienced your subject!

ET
Reviewed by Walt Hardester
"Deeply thinking mind,
dazed and confused,"
I can so relate, well done..

~W~
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