|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Foreboding is this tale *Jerry*
in Your flair for the mystic
that you do so well!!!
|Reviewed by T Jett
|Chilling, Jerry! I experienced that! smelling cigarettes inside and outside when no one else was around ...
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|with the right tension
and sense of expectation
strong writing, Jerry
|Reviewed by jude forese
|lucky you guys didn't explode into the next room ...|
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
got so into this wrote one for you thinking about it, hope you don't mind.
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|....he must be closer than you think............|
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|I'm hooked...!I can smell that match...
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|As your subtext alerts, there are many kinds of distractions to the sensory awareness of the conscious.|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|and, and and ???|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Wonder where this is all going......you sure are adeptly luring us in, Jerry!
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|This is sure a chilling tale (Yikes) Well done so scary indeed Laura
|Reviewed by Ruan Burke
|This is becoming a really interesting series, like a thriller playing out in episodes. Quite dark but compelling.|