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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
4/7/2012 |
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Foreboding is this tale *Jerry*
in Your flair for the mystic
that you do so well!!!
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| Reviewed by T Jett |
4/7/2012 |
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Chilling, Jerry! I experienced that! smelling cigarettes inside and outside when no one else was around ...
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
4/6/2012 |
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with the right tension
and sense of expectation
strong writing, Jerry
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/5/2012 |
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| lucky you guys didn't explode into the next room ... |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
4/5/2012 |
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Jerry,
got so into this wrote one for you thinking about it, hope you don't mind.
Budd |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
4/5/2012 |
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| ....he must be closer than you think............ |
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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
4/5/2012 |
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I'm hooked...!I can smell that match...
Diana... |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
4/5/2012 |
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| As your subtext alerts, there are many kinds of distractions to the sensory awareness of the conscious. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
4/5/2012 |
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| and, and and ??? |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
4/5/2012 |
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Wonder where this is all going......you sure are adeptly luring us in, Jerry!
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
4/5/2012 |
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This is sure a chilling tale (Yikes) Well done so scary indeed Laura
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| Reviewed by Ruan Burke |
4/5/2012 |
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| This is becoming a really interesting series, like a thriller playing out in episodes. Quite dark but compelling. |
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