|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Hallways dark and dreary *Jerry*
only to spark with light at times have
been my pleasure to view through your eyes!!!
|Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)
|shoots, I'm sorry to know it's coming to an end. You got me going! Exciting and chilling!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|"She sounded like a newborn calf" ....lol ... like your series ...|
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|Jerry great waiting for the next.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Neat series, I want more, not just one more...e|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|You keep is on edge!|
|Reviewed by Richard King
|These are interesting though they leave one on the edge..... anticipating the next. One thing is certain however,,,, I'm staying the hell out of your hall.
|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|Laughed out loud all by myself over the line, "She sounded like a newborn calf;" Delightful phrase, "...wasn't scared by half;" This is just as 'up' and the other was 'down.' I'm enjoying the teeter-totter ride of your "Hall" poems. I think the "Hall" series could flourish a whole 'nother season. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Truly a suspenseful write well done indeed Laura
|Reviewed by Vesper Darby
|love these jerry....only one more?....puts the pressure on wondering the end|
|Reviewed by Ruan Burke
|Brilliant! Fantastic build-up to arrive at what seems to be rather than what might have been.|
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|Curiouser and curiouser!!