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The Winds Came
by D. L. Vegas

Sunday, April 22, 2012
Rated "G" by the Author.
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The winds came....
With the thunder
Trailing behind . . .
My heart cried out
A heaviness came over me
I fell to my knees...
The sky blackened
My existence
Was terminated
The day you turned
Your back on me
Without a goodbye




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Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 4/23/2012
Powerful write...I, too, have felt this blackness...

Reviewed by Budd Nelson 4/23/2012
I agree with Ruan anyone who leaves like that is spineless and karma will revisit them in kind.
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 4/23/2012
I think many of us were there at one time, great write.

Reviewed by Ruan Mills Burke 4/23/2012
The one who turned away is the loser. They have to live with their spineless selves and, with that attitude, they many never be truly happy.
For the one left behind, this is an opportunity to focus on what is important now and go for it, achieve new goals unhindered by outside forces, show the loser just exactly what they threw away.

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 4/22/2012
He's a bum!!

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