|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|A tasteful metaphoric journey into the passion of thought. Well done.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Shaking & screaming,
Bouncing & streaming,
A powerful burst of pleasure
Yikes, you gotta get out more, Bro. I guess Ma and I will get you tons of Kleenex and Handy Wipes for Christmas this year.
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Keeps you young Ed. Do it!!:)|
|Reviewed by Richard King
|"... the release paid for and bought" ??? A lady of the evening perhaps?
Never been there, but in todays world leasing has nearly replaced purchasing, why not? Dick
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|I think Sage hit it right on the head LOL..Hmm Golden glow, spose it depends on ur culture as to where that can go ;)
Nice one Ed xx
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|My land, you sure come quick!
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|It is fun when the muse shouts "Eureka" in your ear and things just flow. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Yes the flow is really good in it but agree with Jude, may want to reconsider that last line...Fee|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|does that sign say "stop and lube?"
i like this poem, last line threw me off a bit ...
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|What the ladies have said about ya.|
|Reviewed by Ruan Burke
|All rush and no gold huh? I guess we can't have everything. :o)|
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|How be-coming of you, Ed! Fountain of youth...