|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|You must be sleepin like a log! Reminds me of that Evanescence lyric again, "Wake me up inside", feeling the need to awake to the dream and dream to awaken. Open wide the window and breathe the night air: first star to the left and straight on 'til morning, Peter. On second thoughts, a day spent with a famous old British poet should fix it!! :)) xx|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|jude, a unique perspective and question wrapped in great poetic lines - couldn't sleep if I were writing poetry this good - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|What is really best Jude, dreams or reality and can we tell the difference between a dreaming and awake?|
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|ah, to take action, perhaps to much effort to get from here to there. open one eye at a time i guess.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Your poetry is unique and always top notch!|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Awake or Dreaming...You are a man
of words that I enjoy reading *jude*
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Humor in a dream to awaken ! Interesting scenerio of the window.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|It is possible to have all of the emotions in dreams that we have when awake. To be tired of a common situation is no different than dreaming about anything else that we spend a lot of time doing when awake. The message would be to start spending time doing something else, like reading a good book to take you to a different place when awake so that perhaps your imagination will be more active in your dreams. I get tired of remembering and trying to understand my dreams, sometimes. Maybe that is part of your tired situation.
|Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE
|You'll make a daydream believer out of us yet, jude.
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|sounds like you are already awake :)and desiring to go back to sleep|
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|Apart from the words I really like the shape and pattern of this poem, and I particularly like the line "I'm sitting by a desk embroidered by books....
Quite philosophical...Enjoyed thinking about this one!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Maybe its the otherway round, Bob, awake and dreaming that you are asleep...? e|
|Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)
|I get delirious from lack of sleep and laugh at almost anything! :D Sounds to me like you need some rest, get outdoors and change your screensaver ;)|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
wow, I was almost thinking that your poem was a vision of what is to come. Perhaps the window reflects (no pun intended) your own inner being trying to escape from a stagnant lifestyle or perhaps you just are seeing the world from a different vantage and eminent change is in the near future. I am a bit rusty with interpretation of dreams, I used to do it as a side living back in the 80's..lol
Anyway, you need more exercise and more mental stimulation so that when you go to sleep, you stay asleep...I am having this same issue myself.. It must be spring fever...
Lovely work as always,
Much peace, light and love,
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|Staring out the window... perhaps dreaming of a different world... a different time? I do this often because the world I see becomes more and more a place I don't want to be a part of. Perhaps we still have a few more years of good times? Ah, there-in lies the question we all seek an answer to. I always enjoy your font and your poetry.
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Why was I falling asleep while reading this? Must be the same reasons. I think I'll go to the window now and look out and awaken to a new world.
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|Take the bars off Jude, escape. Bless ya!|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I'm tired of wandering our sad old world, seeing too many sad sights; yet, I wander on.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Staring out a window for long periods mean you are wistful and bored. Go take a walk, let others stare at you out their windows of boredom as you jump up and click your heels.|
|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|Like the layout and font - good poem, Jude|