|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|VERY intriguing writing, Jerry! Awesome phrasing! WEll done!
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Compelling images from an
intriguing writer named
|Reviewed by jude forese
|powerful poem ... "where shadows formed by the candles
point obscure fingers" - great image
|Reviewed by Ruan Burke
|You have thrown light into your darkest corners, allowing the reader just a glimpse of what is behind the mask. Intriguing.|
|Reviewed by Janna Hill
|"where shadows formed by the candles point obscure fingers"
I see them now.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Does that room have rubber on its walls...if so, reserve me one too...e|
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Jerry, once again this is such a deep moving write well done Laura
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|Jerry, your poem hit us where we live! Everyones alone room is different, many times occupying our minds with thoughts of lonliness. Wipe the tears away from your ladies face, replacing them with loving kisses. Great writing, you just get better and better!
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|You are a master of the darkness with amazing versatility to boot. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|An apt description of mental illness.
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|Everyone has their alone room, but few would take inventory as you have, discovering for the reader to consider why we find the alone rooms confining, as well as liberating. After all, where else but here can one juxtapose the frost with the candle light with the "things that live here..." as company... or not. This piece opens up ones imagination far beyond the suggestion of "her face."|
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
Another fantastic write.