|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|Very enjoyable, Vivian.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Owning the wonders while we may, so beautifully penned and thougt provoking.|
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|even the words are healing!|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Love the pic...nothing a little landscape work and a fresh coat of paint cannot cure. In my dreams I travel these lands in beautiful slumber.|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Verses of dreamy contentment unhibited.
Lovely write Lady Vivian.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Love it. Adventure is fleeting unless of course you live it. I rent most of my adventures and there's no tax break. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Thank you for sharing this "dreamy" experience, Vivian. The image reminds me of a poem that I have posted here at AD entitled, "Old House." Thank you. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by jude forese
|some of the best adventures in live are borrowed and never owned ... we just thrive in its experience ... well written, Vivian ...|
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|"doll house charm, bring your ideas, excellent school system"....if i could get away with it i think i would rent anywhere.....|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|It is that getaway space that take up so many good things in life..this is perfect Vivian, you are an amazing writer~
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Many dimensions to this delightfully creative piece!
|Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
|To rent or to own the possibility of living in an exotic location like The Seychelles? Rent I think. You have captured the ennui of a beach holiday really well here with your lines: "leaning on one elbow staring at the pages of my half-read book" Trust me, those white sand beaches are OK. For a while....
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Travel or renovate. Now that's an option? It's a dilemma I'm glad I don't have to deal with, plunking money down on this humble hovel so I can vacation with backyard drama.
Based on your poem, I think I know which option you took.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Real Adventures are The Best.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|up up and delightful away, Vivian,
travelling with you on wings on fire,
right now my spirit house needs a major overhaul
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|I am dreaming of a vacation...working way too much.
Lovely poetry, very laid back and dreamy!!!
Much peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
A dreamy treat indeed.
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Wow, a dreamy poem well done indeed Laura
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Hey get me the name of the realtor, I think I might be able to swing renting that place...thanks...e|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Dreamy and restful is this journey into the past even as you hold down the present and hope for the future adventures to come.|