Flitty, Flirty Flight
by Connie Faust
Monday, April 30, 2012
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Finally! I saw the first butterfly of Spring, 2012 today-- The yellow Beauty was not buying, just browsing, in the Azalea garden. This flighty poem has been waiting expectantly for this day! |
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Two flitting, flirting butterflies
Drew circles ‘round the pond;
Gliding, hiding, loop-the-loop,
Then into the forest beyond.
With graceful flight,
They fluttered their wings
As if to bid “Adieu,”
Then kissed the nectar from a rose,
And flitted from my view!
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Valley of Beracah
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| Reviewed by R David Fulcher |
5/5/2012 |
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| Whimsical and light...perfect springtime poem |
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| Reviewed by Kenny Moon |
5/1/2012 |
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| Beautiful and fleeting like the butterflies. |
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| Reviewed by Joy Hale |
5/1/2012 |
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A lyrical, lovely poem and so appropriate for spring. I love this contribution, so uplifting!
Joy L. Hale |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
5/1/2012 |
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| A SURE SIGN OF THE SEASON WE ARE IN...A MOST BEAUTIFUL SIGN GIVEN WITH WONDERFUL IMAGERY HERE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/1/2012 |
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Short, but sweet and beautiful, like catching sight of butterflies in the Azalea on a spring day.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by J Lynn |
5/1/2012 |
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| I really like your work. It is so heart felt and you see things as I like to. Often when I think of the sweet fragrance of God I think of roses. I love butterflies and the wonderful depiction of the wheelchair was awesome! Great work. I will visit you more often |
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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
5/1/2012 |
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Such an enjoyable, pretty, flirty little portrait...
I'm still waiting to see the first Butterfly of Spring...
Perfectly worded for maximum impact...I so enjoyed this...
Hugs, Diana.. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
5/1/2012 |
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| Excellent, Connie. Really nice. |
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