AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login  

     Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    eBOOKS new!     BOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    EVENTS    VIDEOS    GOLD    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Karl Morgan, iJackie Miller, iKellee Stone, iAudrey Coatesworth, iStephen Cafaro, iKim Glassman, iTony Lambert, i

  Home > Science Fiction > Poetry
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

Ronald W. Hull

· Become a Fan
· Contact me
· Success story
· Books
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Messages
· 814 Titles
· 9,845 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Before 2003

Ronald W. Hull, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.




Featured Book
Wall !
by Robert Mills

WALL !, a novel of intrigue and mystery as Ian Fleming and NoŽl Coward conspire with the father-of-the-bride to elevate the occasion of the nuptials to an international e..  
BookAds by Silver
Gold and Platinum Members


Featured Book
Fast Track (Hardcover)
by John DeDakis

Fast Track (ArcheBooks) is a Mystery/Suspense novel about a young, strong-minded woman's quest to find purpose in life as she unravels the mystery of her parents' deaths ..  
BookAds by Silver
Gold and Platinum Members








Last Man Standing
by Ronald W. Hull
Saturday, May 05, 2012
Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Become a Fan

Recent poems by Ronald W. Hull
•  Mediocre
•  Under Water
•  Sweet Bye and Bye
•  Quatermain
•  Never Knew Your Name
           >> View all 702

Will Smith is
The Last Man Standing
in the movie
I am Legend

This poem is a prelude to my
upcoming short story,
Last Man Standing.



 Last Man Standing


I'm the last man standing,
and I don't know why.
The last man standing,
and I think I'm gonna cry.

It wasn't because of that woman,
Eve's apple of my eye.
No, no, not that woman,
we just said, "Goodbye."

It wasn't in the ring,
that I fought for my soul.
There was no ring to hold me,
and no ring for my goal.

There was nothing to die for,
but so many did.
No ear or an eye for,
it just blew its lid.

The top came off,
a layer at a time.
Civilization came off first,
and then reason and rhyme.

I beat a path to nowhere,
and nowhere, I have found.
Nowhere is a very lonely place,
I don't want to hang around.

So, if you see me in limbo,
limbo is where I am at.
Cross my path to nowhere,
and that will be that.

For I will have to kill you,
oh, so lonely as I am.
There is no reprieve in nowhere,
and I am on the lam.

The devil is chasing me,
and the details are immense.
The devil is in the details,
and I cannot make amends.

My chances are all gone,
there are no chances left.
The world is on my shoulders,
and it's too much to heft.

But it's all... all I have left.

Copyright 2012 © Ronald W. Hull

5/3/12
Devolution Central
Want to review or comment on this poem?
Click here to login!


Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!


Reviewed by Regis Auffray 6/2/2012
You provide much to reflect upon as you awaken thought and emotion via your verses here, Ron. Love and peace,

Regis
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 5/21/2012
Nowhere sounds like a pretty crappy place. Well constructed and interesting flow of ideas. Patrick...and yes I'm way behind on reviews
Reviewed by Chip Bergeron 5/20/2012
There are lots of turns here inm this poerm, Ronald. I really identify with your last stanza and coda. I've felt that way.
Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd 5/11/2012
I haven't seen the movie, Last Man Standing, but it sounds quite traumatic, Ron. Your poem is very direct. I think we all feel at times that we are the last man standing. A thought provoking piece of writing.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 5/11/2012
Well penned Ron and truly a fascinating write!
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 5/10/2012
A stimulation of the senses *Ron*
you have written so well for a
challenge of this magnitude!!!!

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Larry Matthews 5/9/2012
I've seen the movie. Your poem is very well written and although disturbing very thought provoking. Impressive write.

Luke
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley 5/9/2012
How this touches me, but oh how sad that one must see their life in this manner. I have seen the movie, we can regret all we want if the living are about or are gone. To me this speaks inner reflection of one's self. Perhaps I am wrong, but this is my feeling. No-one should have to carry such a heavy burden. What we all must do is let it go. It serves no purpose and adds nothing to our existence. Such desperation Ronald.

Hugs
Love and Light
Lily
Reviewed by Linwood Noble 5/8/2012
I like the way flow great poem!!!
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 5/8/2012
Wow! Powerful writing, Ronald! The weight of the world is a heavey burden..and sometimes it does feel like it's all on one's back!

Anna
Reviewed by Jon Willey 5/7/2012
Ron, "limbo" is where we all are at" - "my chances are all gone, there are no more chances left. The world is on my shoulders, and it's too much to heft." - we are all searchers and our individual and collective worlds bear down upon us, unrelenting, yet it is," all we have left" - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael
Reviewed by Axilea MU 5/7/2012
Like Richard, I am not familiar with the movie. I like the overall impression of standing on the edge of the world that to me seems to be linked to the "human condition". The lines "There was nothing to die for,but so many did." and "Nowhere is a very lonely place, I don't want to hang around." resonate with me.

Axilea
Reviewed by Tom Hyland 5/6/2012
RON ... SOUNDS LIKE A 'CRY FOR HELP' TO ME.

MAN IS A GREGARIOUS CREATURE ... ERGO, UNWANTED SOLITUDE CAUSES LONELINESS. IT IS SAID THAT A PERSON CAN FEEL TOTALLY ALONE, EVEN IN A CROWD ... WHY?

IS IT MENTAL ATTITUDE? IS IT BECAUSE THAT INDIVIDUAL IS SO IMMENSELY DIFFERENT? DO CIRCUMSTANCES, OR ENVIRONMENT CAUSE THIS DEEP-SEATED FEELING?

"WALK A MILE IN MY MOCCASINS!" COMES TO MIND. 'OTHERS' CAN NOT FULLY EMPATHIZE WITH SUCH A PERSON, AS THEY CAN NEVER EXPERIENCE THE SAME SET OF CIRCUMSTANCES, BUT THEY MAY WELL ATTEMPT TO SYMPATHIZE, WHICH SAID PERSON MIGHT WELL INTERPRET IN A NEGATIVE MANNER, THUS FEELING EVEN MORE LONELY. IS THIS A POSSIBILITY?

"LAST MAN STANDING" ? OR, COULD HE BE JUST A 'DIFFERENT' MAN, UNABLE TO STAND? DOES HE KNOW OF OTHERS, WITH SIMILAR CIRCUMSTANCES, WHO CAN TRULY EMPATHIZE? IF SO, DOES HE COMMUNICATE OPENLY WITH THEM? DOES HE WANT TO? HAS HE TRIED? WOULD HE THEN BE LESS 'LONELY'? I WONDER ...

PEACE, TOM.

Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki (Reader) 5/6/2012
Oh the tormented inside which comes out in lines of dark waters..Yes, possibly treading toward the eye of suicide, he walks...
Fascinating poem, Ron...
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 5/6/2012
Splendid write in intense emotions Ron.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by R David Fulcher 5/5/2012
Good expression of desperation and loneliness...when is the story coming out?
Reviewed by John Flanagan 5/5/2012
definitely different, Ron, and definitely
interesting; a bit strange, too, and quirky
but i like quirky and strange...and that
reference to limbo has me thinking; yes, it's
where a lot of us are at

well done!

john
Reviewed by jude forese 5/5/2012
Interesting poem,Ron ... though it felt a bit forced it was intriguing and well written ...
Reviewed by Richard King 5/5/2012
I'm not familiar with the referenced movie, but your last stanza, to wit. "... My chances are all gone, ...there are no chances left. ... The world is on my shoulders, ...and it's too much to heft. " ...leaves me with the sense of a pending suicide. Combine that with the title and it leads me to believe the last man standing intends to kill himself, thus ending mankind.

Scary stuff. Very dark, but interesting reading. Dick
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 5/5/2012
I believe I have enjoyed reading this more than any other poem of yours that comes to mind. There is just something lost and forlorn and DARK about it that grabs me. Good writing, Ron.
Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 5/5/2012
I enjoyed this tremendously! I've got to have a few Will Smith fan friends of mine read this! I know they'll love it!! Thank you!!
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 5/5/2012
I enjoy your ability to write and not allow rhyme to dictate your words. It seems it gets away from most but you have nonetheless mastered it well and the poems theme is never lost. Excellent write, Ron
Reviewed by Felix Perry 5/5/2012
An interesting and unique write...enjoyed.
fee



Authors alphabetically: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Featured Authors | New to AuthorsDen? | Add AuthorsDen to your Site
Share AD with your friends | Need Help? | About us


Problem with this page?   Report it to AuthorsDen
© AuthorsDen, Inc. All rights reserved.