|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
|Finger on the pulse of nature, words that tell she is alive! You have painted motion, scent, sound and freshness in these lines. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|How lovely that one can see their progression of life in this manner. How we age with such beauty and knowledge with what we gather along the way. You are a beautiful soul Debby
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Michael Guy
|not sure which is more beautiful, your poem or or zenish garden; just the right amount of shade. I would love to meditate there...
peace and fulfillment to you, michael
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|patterns upon patterns are fulfilled
not one thought in the effort
spontaneously arising, just being
life is lived, life is happening
awake and beautiful
this stanza is a lovely summation to a poem that has thrilled my heart and mind with an amazing sense of satisfaction as I partook of its images and ideas, Debby. I was 55 on the 4th and I immediately made a bee-line for this poem which seemed appropriate - and I'm glad I did! A beautiful work to "claim" as a birthday write! :)) xx
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Springtime at its best, full of flowering and birdsong, spread by the seeds of poetry.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|wonderful spring poem ...
"sway their hips with the wind
pursing their lips to the passing"
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|wonderful-yes-no thought just living, growing etc--|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Well written and presented...spring is wonderful.
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|Mesmerising and lovely reflection of Mother Nature at her best!
"life is lived, life is happening awake and beautiful"
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|Yes, a tip toe through the tulips and mother natures perfect being.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Taking on nature and taking it on very well, Debby. A composite of a hodgepodge of the tulips and the creatures who inhabit the space of earth nearby.|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Excellent and truly beautiful images in this piece, Debby|