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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
7/17/2012 |
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well said
m |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
7/12/2012 |
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| Finger on the pulse of nature, words that tell she is alive! You have painted motion, scent, sound and freshness in these lines. ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
5/9/2012 |
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How lovely that one can see their progression of life in this manner. How we age with such beauty and knowledge with what we gather along the way. You are a beautiful soul Debby
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Michael Guy |
5/7/2012 |
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not sure which is more beautiful, your poem or or zenish garden; just the right amount of shade. I would love to meditate there...
peace and fulfillment to you, michael |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
5/6/2012 |
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patterns upon patterns are fulfilled
not one thought in the effort
spontaneously arising, just being
life is lived, life is happening
awake and beautiful
this stanza is a lovely summation to a poem that has thrilled my heart and mind with an amazing sense of satisfaction as I partook of its images and ideas, Debby. I was 55 on the 4th and I immediately made a bee-line for this poem which seemed appropriate - and I'm glad I did! A beautiful work to "claim" as a birthday write! :)) xx |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/6/2012 |
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Springtime at its best, full of flowering and birdsong, spread by the seeds of poetry.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/6/2012 |
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wonderful spring poem ...
"sway their hips with the wind
pursing their lips to the passing"
lovely liines |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/6/2012 |
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| wonderful-yes-no thought just living, growing etc-- |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/6/2012 |
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Well written and presented...spring is wonderful.
fee |
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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
5/5/2012 |
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Mesmerising and lovely reflection of Mother Nature at her best!
"life is lived, life is happening awake and beautiful"
Hugs, Diana... |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
5/5/2012 |
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Yes, a tip toe through the tulips and mother natures perfect being.
Bless you! |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
5/5/2012 |
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| Taking on nature and taking it on very well, Debby. A composite of a hodgepodge of the tulips and the creatures who inhabit the space of earth nearby. |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
5/5/2012 |
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| Excellent and truly beautiful images in this piece, Debby |
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