|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|A good reason to avoid hourglass figures. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|What a creative spirit you have! Fabulous blending of two worlds!|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I love that little spider nursery rhyme. Makes for some great hip-hop too. I never knew a black widow I didn't like. But then I never knew a black widow, thank goodness.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|the spiderette will always prevail ... well penned, Vivian ,,|
|Reviewed by Janna Hill
|Well expressed Vivian. A spider's simplicity and our complexity are not so different.|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Unique in expression, captivating poem you have woven..the ending ties it all together~
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|i love the blend of the serious and the childlike,
very effective writing, Vivian, and impactful...
and as ever with you, genuinely worthwhile
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
No male of any species is ever in control, nor does he understand trully. excellent rendition.
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Cunning and intrigue in this web of verse.
Excellent perceptive write Lady Vivian.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Truly a fascinating and very interesting write well done indeed Laura
|Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
|I sure hope it was worth it for all those little male spiders that got eaten afterwards. Just goes to show how weak men are; note to self; beware of predatory females. Are you mocking our folly, Poetess?|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|A warning well penned Vivian.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|You called this one right, Vivian. Black Widows are a cruel and venomous creature, with the allure to beckon unwary males into her web of deceitful intrigue.|