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While I Wait For You
by Amber V Moonstone

Monday, May 21, 2012
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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It's been raining for far too long here in Connecticut. I need the sunshine back into my life.


While I Wait For You

by Amber "V" Moonstone
5/22/12

The rain makes the waiting unbearable,
droplets of nature's tears fall slowly,
as the time that goes by,
while I wait for you.

Sadness permeates my being,
feeling a deep loss,
hoping for the sun to clear the blues away,
while I wait for you.

Glimmers of sunshine appear,
gloom chases sadness,
and, another week flees by,
while I wait for you.

As the rain pounds the pavement,
I watch with utter madness,
feeling lost and alone,
while I wait for you.

Each hour passes, rain still falling,
hopes and dreams wash into the ground,
seeking timeless refuge,
while I wait for you.

Turning into a lost puppy,
feeling abandoned,
having no peace, nor direction,
while I wait for you.

I need a sign that you are coming back,
lifting me up toward the unseen sunshine,
where rainbows once lived and thrived,
while I wait for you.

Can I become whole once again,
knowing that I have lost your sunshine,
feeling reckless and foolish
while I wait for you.

The rain makes the waiting unbearable,
droplets of nature's tears fall slowly,
as the time that goes by,
while I wait for you.

 

 

While I Wait For You (c) Amber "V" Moonstone

 

 

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Reviewed by Barbara Henry 6/16/2012
Movingly poignant,Amber; I especially like "droplets of nature's tears".
Continued success
Barbara J. Henry
Reviewed by Don Juan Amante 6/1/2012
rain can be so cold, unbearable at times but the summer showers are life renewing. may your waiting be rewarded with all you wait for.
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 5/26/2012
You have successfully conveyed the feeling of sadness and loss that comes from being away from a loved one. I'm reminded of Elvis singing, “Georgia Rain.”

Ron
Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader) 5/25/2012
My sweet moonstone, how lovely and heartfelt. But do not despair as all good things are well worth the wait. Keep faith within yourself. You write beautifully flowing with the emotion of a good soul. You and Lily are one in each other for I see the same in you both.

I bow and tip my hat to you

Cyrano
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 5/25/2012
sorrows well spills here...and I feel such deep empathy
there are so many people waiting for things that will never
happen...or maybe they will-but the sadest inflection here
in this deep emotional expression is the persons loss
how sad to not enjoy life because waiting on some person

I am going to float with the positive side of this however
as it is such a self sabotoging thing to wait on someone
& deplete ones own life in that waiting-so I am going with
this is about a loved one in the services & the longing is
that their partner will be home soon & reunited with family

Never Wait For YOUR DREAMS!!
Love's Embrace Melding With You Dear Sister
Vickie
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg 5/24/2012
awe nature, she can challenge the emotions indeed and bring up all kinds of buried treasures, such as your beautiful expression here. in loving "what is" one may suffer less ;)
Reviewed by JMS Bell 5/24/2012
THE 'REASON'("I WATCH YOUR UTTER MADNESS") FOR THE WAIT IS SO IMPORTANT; ARE THEY AWAY WORKING ON A 'CALL' TO ONE OF THE MANY FIELDS OF SERVICE?...OR HAVE THEY LEFT ONE FOR A 'GREENER' PATH AND THEY, UNABLE TO ACCEPT THEIR DECISION...ARE WAITING FOR THEM TO 'COME TO THEIR SENSES'? IT SOUNDS LIKE ONE IS WANING AND, IN ANY CASE... THE 'BALL' IS IN THEIR COURT. WELL DONE, AMBER AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Dark Knight 5/24/2012
some of my most passionate moments have been in the rain-why wait for the sunshine-you know what you need-go for it
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 5/23/2012
The listlessness is so apparent in the gentle drum-beating rhythms of this poem that both have a "spilling" effect and also a sense of repetition which illustrates that locked-in madness your gloom and despondency creates. Waiting is the thing I do most badly and I can appreciate that inner tension of wanting to break free and yet also wanting to just hang on. Love the circle effect of the repeated first/last verse, too. The knowledge that all this will be past in the blink of an eye when the sun once more BURSTS through that sky keeps you strong and the truth is that although we feel "stuck in a time warp", actually time is linear and we ARE one step closer to the desired moment's return... As always, straight from the heart and unflinchingly soul-naked. Be well, Amber. xx
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 5/22/2012
Rain can be dreary, but I see the
sun shine in Your Heart with a
beautiful Soul...go barefoot!!!

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 5/22/2012
Awaiting as time goes by. Sunshine anew a rainbow of blessngs
for you. Well written Amber.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather 5/22/2012
Go out in the rain, Amber.....it's where the fun people really are. HA!
Reviewed by Andy Turner 5/22/2012
the rain keeps falling, i keep calling, yet something's missing, i guess it's kissing, missing you.... hope your wishes turn to kisses xx
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 5/22/2012
Such an authentic glimpse into your beautiful heart, Amber!
Love,
Christine
Reviewed by John Bidwell 5/22/2012
Well written somber lines to contemplate.
I had a fabulous time in Connecticut a few weeks ago, in Simsbury.
It may become a new hang out spot.
Hope the sun shines soon.
John
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley 5/22/2012
Although rain can evoke many feelings Amber, you also know it removes and washes away negativity. We are both Reiki practitioners, see the signs, listen to the sounds and await what Universe has to say.

My Angel card I pulled for you concentrating on this says:

"Clarity"

Angel wisdom reminds you that a busy cluttered mind is a sick one and a still, clear mind is a divine one.

Allow the wisdom in your heart to radiate out and dissolve the chatter of your mind.

Know that your angel has drawn this to your attention and is waiting to help you in your task.

Sit quietly so that you can find the stillness within. Then you can shine a pure clear light onto every area of your life.

In the clarity of this light the angels will reveal a new way of being.

You will see things differently and be able to make decisions from strength and clarity.

Love and Light
Lily
Reviewed by Laura Fall 5/22/2012
A touching write written so heartfelt as I hope your wait ends soon and you have many sunshine days my friend Laura
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 5/22/2012
I guess that the rain can evoke many emotions. Oddly enough, I just posted a poem about the rain bringing me many marvelous memories.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 5/22/2012
Yeah, i like rain, but if you are in a position like you are in, waiting for someone, the rain accentuates that wait to an unbearable sensation.
Reviewed by Budd Nelson 5/22/2012
Amber,
I hope the saddness of waiting is over.
Budd
Reviewed by Zech Romero 5/22/2012
I got the clear feeling of slow uncomfortable tension building up.



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