|Reviewed by John Domino
|A wonderful tribute to your son. He will remember this writing forever. That's a long time!
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|What a handsome young man, look how he is thinking! That expression is: I am in deep thought or watch your step! :)
I love my boys and I too am so blessed to have them. One very strongly independent, one very soft and loving like me. Both excellent fathers!
Lovely Jane, thank you for sharing a part of you with us.
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
|I'm not seeing the blonde hair here, ha ha ~ but I am seeing the kind of adoration that makes a mother turn to pudding. It doesn't matter how old they are or get, does it? I like the way you handled the positions of the lines "Kind heart/I do" then roll them into '..do/Not understand". And spreading out "To heav'n/On earth/Through you" for me is a visual stretch of those words like an opening hand. Attributing child (adult or otherwise) as a tie is just a beautiful concept. Thanks for this little giant writing. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Timothy Popely
|Beautiful <3 Thanks Mom!|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|he is a very handsome man Jane!!
Love & Blessings
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
a nice tribute to your son.