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An Everlasting Love
by D. L. Vegas

Tuesday, June 19, 2012
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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The mist floated across
The ocean shore
Finding refuge
Within our loveless hearts

Hearts that gave up
On the treasures
Of love and only
Pursued lust-

We had no intimacy
Taking what we needed
From each other
Time and again

We were afraid of the closeness
Pulling us together
Having to depend on each other
A bonded relationship

That Sunday we found love
Love that enveloped our souls
Breathed life into our hearts
Generating an everlasting  love.  .  .

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Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley 6/21/2012
:) and you asked me a question prior to this. You nearly answered it in your last 4 lines Deborah.

Wonderfully written and expressed as is all your prose and poems

Love and Light
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 6/20/2012
Sometimes resistance is futile...and when we're open everlasting love finds a place to live in our hearts. Beautifully penned, Deborah...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull 6/20/2012
I wonder what it was in Sunday and made all the difference?

Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/20/2012
Wonderful write. I do believe in love at first sight, or at least instant attraction, but I also believe love is something that is build nurtured over time until it becomes everlasting.
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 6/19/2012
I like that you say "found love"
so many people say "fall in love" or
"fell in love" ...and you know how that goes
Intimacy is a beautiful bond tenderly embracing into love
a beautiful feeling in this poem
& too the voice of reasons in the wild feral's of lust

Untamed & Unbriddled
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 6/19/2012
A friendship foundation evolving into
lovers *Debrorah* should stand for the
test of time and for reading....

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 6/19/2012
I love how the discovery of love seemingly creeps up to and enfolds you in this poem, Deborah - rather like that invasiver and pervasive mist. Fear evaporates as true feelings are nurtured in the security of knowingness. Lust is transformed and transcends into the real, life-giving deal - nice! :)) xx
Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 6/19/2012
Now this sounds like a solid type of love, girl!

Love ya!


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