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Angie
by Jerry Bolton

Thursday, June 21, 2012
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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how could I forget Angie
or Dallas, Texas
or Jimmy and Angie's sister
I've forgotten her name
Angie had red hair
Jimmy and her sister lived together
they set me up with a blind date with Angie
the four of us went dancing
Angie and I melded into each other's arms
on that dance floor
some hope-to-hit-it-big country band
was kicking ass
had us clinging to each other
oblivious to everyone else
by the time Angie and I made it to my apartment
we had groped each other senseless
on that dance floor
Jimmy and her sister were long gone
we were on the sofa
having a nightcap and sucking
on each other's tongues
after awhile I said, how about let's go into the bedroom?
she said, "You'll have to pick me up and carry me."
I said, huh?
she said it again
so what's a guy to do in a situation like that
right
I stood, gathered her into my arms
and we played house the rest of the night
Angie and I were an item after that
she was a good person
dynamite in bed
we'd probably still be together
except for that terrible night
when her eight-year-old daughter
came into the room where we were and said
I'LL CALL THE POLICE!

©June 8, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

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Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 6/23/2012
You two must have been making quite a rukus in there! Rock on!

Love ya!

Jane
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 6/22/2012
You had me *Jerry* until you
threw me with the unexpected
ending, but then you can be
a master at that....

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by jude forese 6/21/2012
lol ... ""You'll have to pick me up and carry me." for a moment there you must of thought she wanted to get hitched ...

you should have the little girl "but i'm not hurting yer mom!"
Reviewed by Budd Nelson 6/21/2012
Jerry,
wonderful story my friend, never been in that exact one but close.
Budd
Reviewed by Andy Turner 6/21/2012
I'm still laughing at - The sucking of each-others tongues - Blunt and to the point.
Enjoy the way you speak to the reader.
Once again this has that air of mystery.
The kid calling the kops, for robbing her mum. :) Nice write, Jerry.
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 6/21/2012
That's what you get for dating underage mothers. Patrick
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 6/21/2012
This reads like a memoir that turned into a nightmare. I know the feeling. Danced with so many…

Ron
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 6/21/2012
You should have locked the door...
Nice one Jerry!

Peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by Richard King 6/21/2012
Nice story, Jerry. Surprise ending, but I like it, you never disappoint. Dick
Reviewed by Odin Roark 6/21/2012
That last line allows for some interesting interpretation. Kind of akin to "Derek, when are you going to do it?"
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 6/21/2012
Busted! Wasn't expecting that last line...giggle...

Anna
Reviewed by Laura Fall 6/21/2012
Wow, Jerry a fascinating tale indeed Laura
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 6/21/2012
Yeah, I could see where the 8 year thing could put a damper on what was going on...;-) e
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley 6/21/2012
Do what? I think I am missing something here. Everything sounded wonderful in fact at first I thought this was a metaphor. Actually it is wonderful, but I wonder why the 8 year old daughter ruined everything unless... it was an 8 year old habit that was catching up. You really have me thinking on this one! It to me seems more like a puzzle! At the end why was it ruined because of this! Great one, I like this... it really has me thinking!

Love and Light
Lily
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